Showering

Droplets delicately adorn the skin
dressing it with diamonds of life.
How you seduce the mind,
your peals pleasingly relaxing the body.
Soothing the soul,
your warmth trails playful affection,
infectiously raising temperatures
whilst refreshing hidden areas,
cleansing parts unseen;
until your passionate embrace is over,
and quietly you renew your natural force.
Waiting, welcoming tired spirits,
awakened, your piped need to run free escapes.
Then caught, trapped and suspended once more.
You stand now powerlessly surrendering
while pressures urge of desire to embrace
holds you, patiently awaiting naked return.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/16/2009 12:21:00 AM
Smile~As a matter of fact once more, I believe I am going to imagine and attempt that~Going back through the portal door dear gifted lady!!!:):)~"This Is An Extremely Excellent & Beautiful Write"~Again, "My Love & Warmth Always To 'You,' And All 'You Love,' Forever, John!!"~"Have A Very Beautiful Day, Gifted & Beautiful Anna Marie!!!":):) Bye ~
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Date: 6/16/2009 12:15:00 AM
Smile~Once again, after rereading this write here dear lady, "You Leave Me Somewhat Spellbound With Your Magical Pen!!!":):)~Smile, "You" know what I would truly love? To pretend as though I had just met "You," and everything began today....Smile, then I could avoid my sometimes fumblings of mis-interpretations!? And, all things would be brand new?! Kind of like taking a good long hot cleansing shower....Cont....
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Date: 6/16/2009 12:06:00 AM
Smile~I thought that I commented upon this amazingly written and wonderful write before!?~But I must have only read it amid a late night moment I see....Yet, I surely do remember this splendidly vivid and image filled creation of artistic beauty!!!:):)~As a matter of fact, "Beautiful & Precious Anna Marie," I have recognized "Your Talented Writing Abilities" since I first layed eyes upon "Your Wonders!!!":):)....Cont....
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Date: 6/15/2009 5:17:00 AM
Now that, Anna-Marie, is quite a shower! And it is wonderful, I'm sure to feel so relaxed. You brought a very fresh view of showering to this site. It was fun to read. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 5/31/2009 6:18:00 PM
Beautiful images, sensual, good clean fun, lol, but really, a great write. "Patiently awaiting naked return." This line will keep me going back forever... Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Comments like that will help me keep writing.
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Date: 5/31/2009 8:26:00 AM
Anna-Marie. This is great. There is some really outstanding imagery in this poem and you have created a piece that relys soley on imagination and not overt description. Is the word 'nature's' needed? I ask because is seems to be too much information and, to me, it spoils the overal impact of the poem.
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Date: 5/31/2009 5:50:00 AM
That is a powerful conclusion, Anna, it opens up the poem for ontological possibilities. Love it.
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Date: 5/30/2009 7:50:00 AM
Sensual beauty here dazzling the senses. Truly beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/30/2009 5:11:00 AM
Wow, i will probably be reciting this in the shower now, which may be a relief from my singing, at least the family won't go deaf now, great write>James
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