Shower

Shower I have to say what a start to a beautiful day my hair all fluffy my nose all shinny my body feels so fresh everything washed away rich smells rubbed on I have to sing a song lady in red is dancing with me cheek to cheek freshness unfolds in all my clean clothes ready to take on the world stepping out the door to explore

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/7/2017 4:27:00 PM

The shower...The lady in red...The shower again :).Really got my mind going places :)Am smilin

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/7/2017 5:03:00 PM

HI Charmaine , now I smile :) you posses a great sense of humour there must be some Irish blood lurking in the geins lol :))) hugs

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/7/2017 12:47:00 PM

Ahhhh, shower the most wonderful thing in the world. Good for you Niall, you go on out and enjoy away your exploration :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/7/2017 12:51:00 PM

Hi Akkina , yes sure is wonderful , thanks for comment :))hugs

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 5/7/2017 8:05:00 AM

Everyday I'm so thankful for my shower, (how lucky we are to have hot running water) I know just how you feel.

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/7/2017 9:52:00 AM

Hi Elizabeth , So true , the simple things in life are the very thing we crave for if you have got them :))))hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 5/7/2017 6:04:00 AM

Nothing like a bath or shower to invigorate and wake you or relax you after a long day. Oh I wish i could hear that singing Niall lol - seriously I used to be a big Chris de burgh fan went to Germany a couple of times to see him in concert:-) hugs Jan xx

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/7/2017 6:12:00 AM

Hi Jan , Chris is good , my singing is not so good lol but I do try :))) hugs