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Show Me, Don'T Tell Me Rumi

Words of love fell from his lips; he asked if I could feel the affection. Wiping the bruises on my face, it was only his anger I felt. He cooed so sweetly to get his way, but cast me aside when done. Still flush from the heat of the moment, I looked up and he’d moved on to another. Now I prefer the “strong, silent” type – men who give hugs and stay by my side. I’ll not be convinced by words alone; smiles and loyalty speak louder.
*Inspired by Rumi’s “I closed my mouth and spoke to you in a hundred silent ways.” Written May 3, 2015 for Mystic Rose’s contest

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Date: 7/29/2015 5:26:00 PM
A very sensory piece from you here Carolyn I know a little of a writer called Rumi, is this from any of his life's events.? In any event ' a thought inspiring write' my best to you..'
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Joe Maverick
Date: 11/25/2016 1:02:00 AM
Just returning to this write Carolyn, I can see its solely an interpretation of one of his pieces, again though I say very skilfully done indeed.'
Date: 5/7/2015 4:26:00 PM
I love this. It's message is close to my heart, CArolyn. Hope it scores!
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Date: 5/3/2015 6:16:00 PM
It's a reward guarantted and promised for good response, well done. Good luck in the contest, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:59:00 PM
Somtimes we see beauty in a rose and forget to pay attention to the thorns, until we bleed..good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:42:00 PM
The wisdom of life. Powerful with a sold, ending conviction learned.
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Date: 5/3/2015 1:22:00 PM
gosh this is hard hitting Carolyn such powerful imagery the 2nd stanza is simply heartbreaking - used and then he moves on to the next victim - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 5/3/2015 2:32:00 PM
I think the point is that we're only victims if we let ourselves be that way. Sometimes we can spot losers right away. Thanks for reading, Hon!
Date: 5/3/2015 1:22:00 PM
When you pick up your pen you open up a world filled with poetic thoughts...beautiful. Emile.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 5/3/2015 2:33:00 PM
Having read some of your work, your comment means a great deal to me, Emile. You are blessed with a lot of talent! Thank you for reading.

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