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Shoulder To Cry On

She saved my life the day you died so suddenly. I sat and cried; she held my hand, she made us tea. I'd needed someone there with me. for Carolyn's Unity contest

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Date: 1/27/2021 3:27:00 AM
Ahh!! Very emotive and expressive work. Reads like a good contender. Way to go. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/26/2021 3:02:00 PM
You did a very nice short one here , Jack. I don't know your placement but I see it's a winner. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/26/2021 3:09:00 AM
So beautiful and touching. A well deserved win. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/23/2021 8:44:00 PM
Powerful message Jack, Congratulations!
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Date: 1/23/2021 12:04:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win in the Carolyn Devonshire contest, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/22/2021 5:03:00 AM
Such a union may only last a short time, but its significance is immeasurable, Jack. Very touching poem! Congrats on your place in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/20/2021 10:14:00 AM
aww Jack this is so moving especially at such terrible times when we can't have physical contact with those who mourn:-( hugs jan xx
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