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Should Not Have Looked

I turned around...should not have looked; they all were there and set to go. The time was set, the day was booked; today would be the final show. A tear came flowing down my cheek... I turned around...should not have looked. My heart was pounding, legs were weak, and yet somehow, my mind was hooked. That arm with claws was soon unhooked to swivel, reach up high and crash. I turned around...should not have looked to watch it make that painful gash. With digs and pulls...they tore it down. My childhood home they came and took to build a bridge from town to town. I turned around...should not have looked. Sandra M. Haight ~6th Place~ Contest: I Should Not Have Looked Sponsor: Mystic Rose Judged: 06/14/2017 New York State claimed my childhood home via eminent domain in 1960 and demolished it to build the Newburgh-Beacon Bridge.

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Date: 6/15/2017 1:09:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your awesome win! ~*
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Date: 6/14/2017 8:43:00 PM
Nicely penned Sandra..Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/1/2017 4:33:00 AM
Sandra thank you for sharing its is one the most beautiful poems my eyes have seen, read and felt . thank you
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/6/2017 3:18:00 PM
Thank you for your very uplifting and kind comment, Talin! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/31/2017 5:06:00 PM
Sandra, this is no doubt a 7. Best wishes in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/6/2017 3:18:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Adeniji. Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 5/31/2017 10:31:00 AM
Sandra, This is written so well and so sad. I can feel the loss/sadness.
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Date: 5/31/2017 9:52:00 AM
That is so terrible Sandra...a beautiful somber poem
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/6/2017 3:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tim. Yes, is was a sad time then. Sandra
Date: 5/31/2017 9:34:00 AM
So sad, Sandra! All in the name of so-called progress! I'm not familiar with this form but I love your work here! Best of luck
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/6/2017 3:16:00 PM
Thanks for your supportive and kind comments, White Wolf. Much appreciated. Sandra

Book: Shattered Sighs