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Should Doors Close

Should doors close on my heart's cold darkness In its dung-lit house of empty rooms Where cobwebs hang like heavy curtains And dust falls on memories of love Should doors close and leave me to my fate For I have gone mad since you have gone And the last vestige of life flickers Until my final breath should doors close 6/8/20 contest Repeat the phrase...should doors close sponsor nette onclaud

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Date: 6/13/2020 7:19:00 PM
Heartfelt emotions in a smooth flow of words Frederic. This is beautiful. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/13/2020 7:02:00 PM
So lovely! Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo
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Date: 6/13/2020 12:40:00 PM
ohh, poignantly crafted... thanks for joining my spree with shared to win, frederic.. huggs
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Date: 6/13/2020 3:38:00 AM
A passionate plea Frederic. Very beautiful! I hope to see it at the top. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/13/2020 3:28:00 AM
Fredric This is beautifully written! Congrats on your win! So touching and you have taken us in to that room with doors shut!
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Date: 6/9/2020 8:17:00 PM
Oh wow, I feel the pain and heartbreak in your words, Frederic...well done! Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda xx
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Date: 6/9/2020 2:54:00 PM
oh my this is melancholy... "cold darkness" "empty rooms" "cobwebs like heavy curtains" ... You know how to create a mood! :)
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