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Shotgun

When I was a kid, in the family car We all knew where to sit; If the order ever wavered, Someone’d likely have a fit. But today I heard of something new Which tells me things have changed; If someone hollers, “Shotgun!” Well, the seats get rearranged. The “Shotgun!” yeller sits up front, Right by the driver’s side, A better view, perhaps, and thus A more prestigious ride. I wonder how that’s working out For I can clearly see The problems this might cause within The average family. Had this been in existence when My sibs and I were judging, We would have yelled our heads off But my mom would not be budging!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/12/2014 7:18:00 AM
Now be quiet and behave if your life you are to save. All this racket is no good, there is room out on the hood. If I'm to drive defensive, I can not be offensive. So sit right there without a care. It's such delight when you are pensive. Peace. :)
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Date: 11/12/2014 6:29:00 AM
Too Cute, Ilene. Brings back memories of my own kids. As for myself, well, I'm so old, or we were so poor we didn't have a car. We went everywhere in a rough old wagon, pulled by a team of horses. There were no back seats. We sat on quilts and bounced around like jumping beans.
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Date: 11/11/2014 8:49:00 PM
Ilene,That would have also happen in my home of 7. :) eve
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Date: 11/11/2014 7:56:00 PM
This made me laugh, because it is a joke in our family that my granddaughter always starts yelling shotgun, before the rest of us are even out of the front door!! Cute poem, Ilene!!
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Date: 11/11/2014 5:55:00 PM
LOL Eileen another witty write my friend:-) Hugs jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 11/11/2014 6:04:00 PM
thanks a lot, jan! you are consistently supportive...
Date: 11/11/2014 5:51:00 PM
Excellent,Excellent, Excellent. I love this, well done ilene
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 11/11/2014 6:03:00 PM
thank you very much, jerry! much appreciated...

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