Shotgun

When I was a kid, in the family car
We all knew where to sit;
If the order ever wavered,
Someone’d likely have a fit.

But today I heard of something new
Which tells me things have changed;
If someone hollers, “Shotgun!”
Well, the seats get rearranged.

The “Shotgun!” yeller sits up front,
Right by the driver’s side,
A better view, perhaps, and thus
A more prestigious ride.

I wonder how that’s working out
For I can clearly see
The problems this might cause within
The average family.

Had this been in existence when
My sibs and I were judging,
We would have yelled our heads off
But my mom would not be budging!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 7:18 AM
Now be quiet and behave if your life you are to save. All this racket is no good, there is room out on the hood. If I'm to drive defensive, I can not be offensive. So sit right there without a care. It's such delight when you are pensive. Peace. :)
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 6:29 AM
Too Cute, Ilene. Brings back memories of my own kids. As for myself, well, I'm so old, or we were so poor we didn't have a car. We went everywhere in a rough old wagon, pulled by a team of horses. There were no back seats. We sat on quilts and bounced around like jumping beans.
Roper Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 8:49 PM
Ilene,That would have also happen in my home of 7. :) eve
Richards Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 7:56 PM
This made me laugh, because it is a joke in our family that my granddaughter always starts yelling shotgun, before the rest of us are even out of the front door!! Cute poem, Ilene!!
Allison Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 5:55 PM
LOL Eileen another witty write my friend:-) Hugs jan xx
Bauer Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 6:04 PM
thanks a lot, jan! you are consistently supportive...
Curtis Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Excellent,Excellent, Excellent. I love this, well done ilene
Bauer Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 6:03 PM
thank you very much, jerry! much appreciated...
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