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An angry Father, that wore a frown has watched the rise of the devil's moon While pacing, he's worn the carpet down They arrive at dawn, and none too soon! Broken curfews, her virtue at stake The stakes are high, but the daughter dared Dad quickly plans a wedding date! No explanation or sage to share They are ushered in, without a sigh Their vows would choke the most aloof It clouds the starlight in their eyes, and shoots the moon, un-bullet proofed! This patriarch must take a stand Holy wedlock was in high demand ! __________________________________________________ 11/17/15 Carrie Richards Submitted for "Trashed # 4" Contest: Sponsored by Broken Wings

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Date: 12/8/2015 12:58:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations, SKAT
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Date: 12/8/2015 4:28:00 AM
Carrie, how smoothly you wrote the sonnet! Congrats !
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:13:00 PM
I thought this was so cute, a different idea that worked. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/18/2015 6:10:00 AM
Nicely done Carrie, Best Wishes for the contest Kevin
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