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Short-Lived

In the quiet of early morning, a dewdrop clings to the edge of a leaf, a fragile globe reflecting the first light. It trembles, a breath away from falling, a brief testament to the night's embrace. So too, our joys, gathered like rain in the cups of our hands, slipping through fingers no matter how tightly closed. The laughter of children fades into silence, the warmth of a sunbeam dissolves into shadow, and words spoken in tenderness are carried off by the wind. Yet, in this transience, there's a beauty, a sharpening of senses to the grace of the ephemeral. For in the knowing that all is fleeting, we learn to cherish the moments, to hold them close, even as we let them go. Like the dewdrop at dawn, glistening and gone.

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Date: 3/16/2024 2:06:00 PM
Dan, short indeed. Like a brief spark in the grand scheme of things. I too am 73 and see how much more often I am thinking about these things.
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Date: 3/13/2024 10:01:00 AM
Sorry for the loss of your friend.
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Date: 3/12/2024 5:48:00 PM
I enjoyed this piece very much. The tinge of sadness adds to it’s emotional resonance.
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Don Iannone
Date: 3/12/2024 10:53:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. “Short-Lived” was prompted by the loss of a dear friend, Tyler. As we grow older, death stops more often at our doorstep.
Date: 3/12/2024 6:47:00 AM
Incredibly beautiful Donald….your poem really touched me! Life is so precious and should be cherished and treasured. I call our senior years the “ age of appreciation” as thats when we truly see the beauty and joys in life and appreciate them more. We also appreciate the vulnerability of time.The last lines in your amazing poem sums it up perfectly! Debx
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Don Iannone
Date: 3/12/2024 10:48:00 PM
Thank you, Deb. Age of appreciation…I like that way of seeing life at 73. I work with cancer patients, which constantly reminds me that life is a gift.
Date: 3/12/2024 6:44:00 AM
Very nice Donald, the importance of cherishing moments, treasuring simple pleasures. If we could just sustain them but alas, transient they are indeed
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Date: 3/12/2024 10:45:00 PM
Hi Tom, thank you for sharing your thoughts about my poem. I agree. At times, I find myself working too hard at life.
Date: 3/12/2024 4:57:00 AM
Hi Daniel, I like your comments. Yes, life is "on loan" to us, and it is a gift. Also, how our lives slipped by, day to day, moment by moment. Meditation reminds me to experience the moment; to experience the beauty of each moment. Have a wonderful day. Thank you. ~Don
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Date: 3/12/2024 12:42:00 AM
Good Morning Daniel , This is such a beautiful poem, a reminder of our fragility like the dewdrop clinging to the edge of the leaf , and joy slipping through our fingers no matter how tightly closed these are beautiful images which has made me personally stop and think. I've personally always believed everything we have in life is merely on loan , and never owned . Daniel
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