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Daddy said he wasn't going to tie my shoes anymore. My brother tied them and said, "Do you want to learn to tie them now?". Tying my own shoes, I proudly walked away, independent child.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 1/5/2024 10:19:00 AM

Great Sijo, Sara, you conveyed with your words the innocence those little ones have in a fantastic manner.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/5/2024 12:09:00 PM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit and the kind review of my work. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 1/4/2024 10:08:00 AM

Ah nostalgic, and i especially remember my sons toddler days as i read this, those little things that make them so proud of being able to do something on their own is just such a joy to witness too, very touching and brilliant sijo. Love the flow of this too, pleasure reading you always. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/4/2024 12:08:00 PM

IE, it is wonderful to watch the little ones grow and develop into the person they need to be. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/4/2024 8:21:00 AM

Fun poem. But she must learn to do such simple chores.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/4/2024 12:07:00 PM

Yes, so much to learn to live successfully in life. Thanks for the visit. Sara K