Shoe Survey

I scanned all my shoes with my eyes

What I concluded was no big surprise

        As I recall

        It was me brought them all

They're all my favorites and they're all my size.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 11/7/2011 10:29:00 PM
..CONGRATULATIONS ~ IN THE SHOE CONTEST... I THINK every title is aweome.. ;-) Have a wonderful NIGHT, GOD BLESS,..P.D.
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Date: 11/7/2011 9:01:00 AM
Congrats Ralph on a wonderful well deserved win my friend..in the Shoes contest... awesome as always luv..
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Date: 11/6/2011 10:37:00 PM
RALPH~ SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY~ CONGRATULATIONS!~ in my shoe contest~LUV*SKAT
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Date: 2/18/2011 3:00:00 PM
Now you realize that your poem could have been written by a female....? Many of my girlfriends feel this very same way regarding their shoes!!( I've not written a limerick. I suppose I will try my first on St. Patty's Day!) You and I must share a similar rhyming gene! Blessings!
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Date: 2/13/2011 7:08:00 AM
Witty Limerick, I never knew shoes could be so funny. Have a lovely weekend Ralph....:)
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Date: 2/9/2011 1:10:00 PM
Ralph trust you to come up with this witty one ;-) xxxWilma
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Date: 2/8/2011 10:25:00 PM
I love standing in front of all my shoes too sometimes and thinking how cool they look (except for the beat up ones. haha) Cute limerick, Ralph. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/8/2011 7:17:00 PM
Very witty final line. Thanks for sharing. Elton
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Date: 2/8/2011 5:48:00 PM
How many shoes your favorites, Ralph. nice entry
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Date: 2/8/2011 4:37:00 PM
LOL Men don't have nearly as many shoes as most women, Ralph! Great entry for the shoe contest. You wouldn't believe some of the shoe limericks I've been seeing for this contest. Dane Ann wrote about her combat boots from the military. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/8/2011 4:31:00 PM
Even though the last line was too long, I like this very humorous write.
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