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Smiley The Clown — Found those clown girls today and their photo made...

Shoe Problems

This limerick is about a clown,
who when shopping in a nearby town.
A mother with small boys,
said his giant shoe made too much noise.
Shoeless he shopped while tip toeing around.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 7/29/2025 3:21:00 AM
What a considerate clown ~ sweet
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/30/2025 8:51:00 PM
Yep, not your average clown. Bill
Date: 7/26/2025 9:08:00 PM
What a spectacle he likely made! He must've subsequently been the cause of much hilarity. A fun limerick, Bill. Best of wishes :D
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/27/2025 10:10:00 AM
I'm sure people were surprised to see a clown out shopping. LOL. Have a pleasant Sunday, Evelyn. Bill
Date: 7/26/2025 6:23:00 PM
A very mindful and polite clown! Bravo!
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/27/2025 10:09:00 AM
Yes, unusual clown, Anne. Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend, Bill
Date: 7/26/2025 4:30:00 PM
Hello Bill, He was trying to be quiet for the boyin the store. My poet friend enjoy your ev ening. /Darlene//
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2025 9:53:00 AM
Hello Bill, thank you . i wish y9u to have a nice weekend. . My poet friend, /Darlene/
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/26/2025 6:13:00 PM
You got it! Have a great weekend, my friend. Hugs, Bill
Date: 7/26/2025 4:08:00 PM
you're so good with Limericks! This one made me chuckle! I think I saw this guy at Walmart today...his shoes did make a lot of noise :-) hugs
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/26/2025 6:14:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. You're so supportive! Hugs, Bill
Date: 7/26/2025 3:58:00 PM
A sensible clown. Wonder if he is in cahoots with the Mcburglar?
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/26/2025 6:15:00 PM
Good comeback, Kim. It made me smile. That's a good thing. Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend, Bill
Date: 7/26/2025 3:12:00 PM
Enjoyed your funny Limerick, Bill. The picture is a great accompaniment!
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/26/2025 6:16:00 PM
Glad you like my Limerick, Sara. I try to add a little humor to my poetry from time to time. Hugs, Bill
Date: 7/26/2025 1:41:00 PM
- Fun poem, Bill :))) - hugs
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/26/2025 6:17:00 PM
Glad you like it, Anne-Lise. :-) Hugs, Bill
Date: 7/26/2025 11:54:00 AM
Thanks for the smile, my friend. Today I discovered your wonderful, funny side. Blessings Bill.
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/26/2025 6:18:00 PM
Thanks, my dear friend. It comes out less often these days. Have a great weekend! Bill
Date: 7/26/2025 11:49:00 AM
Very funny, Bill. I see you're just "clowning around" again! Haha! Wonder what his socks looked like after his shopping trip! Blessings.
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/26/2025 6:19:00 PM
Good one, Sam. Probably a little worn out and dirty LOL. Have a pleasant evening, my friend. Bill
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