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Shoe Bop - Kerplop

Cinderella was a starry-eyed lass Dancing at the ball in shoes made of glass While bolting for the doors She encountered waxed floors And unfortunately fell on her A$$! For: SKAT* SHOES contest

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George Aul

Date: 3/22/2011 11:03:00 AM

I really liked this one.........George

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/1/2011 6:54:00 PM

The last line gets the door prize and the mark. This is a winner in my book! Regards, Gerard.

Joe Inka

Date: 2/10/2011 10:20:00 PM

Hahaha. Very clever. So that's how she lost the shoe

Karis Watie

Date: 2/10/2011 7:18:00 PM

Funny!

Constance La France

Date: 2/10/2011 1:45:00 PM

This is so cute and witty, I am sure SKAT will love it~~

John Heck

Date: 2/10/2011 1:30:00 PM

Pretty good...hey, I gotta a visually-induced chuckle out of it. Best wishes for the contest. Peace always, John

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/10/2011 12:27:00 PM

Got a great laugh from your limerick, Kory. Clever and witty! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/9/2011 12:30:00 PM

hehe, thanks for the laughs Kory ;-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2011 11:30:00 AM

Since the contest has been judged, I will have to look and see how won..This one was a good one to be in the winning circle..Enjoyed..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara