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Date written: 03/10/2021

ah, shivers... generously course through my veins every time i'm touched by you; the all-consuming current at the tip of your fingers, earthshattering! oh my, shivers... i feel them strongly all over they seize control of me like a wicked fever each time your lips softly meets mine; kiss me over and over again. whoa, the shivers... your voice engenders make the floor beneath my feet tremble. whisper sweet nothings into my ear again; one more... to call it a night, my dear. this very moment, nothing feels... more divine. Date written: 03/10/2021

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Date: 3/11/2021 9:28:00 AM
Such a romantic poem. It almost give me some shivers.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/11/2021 10:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Victor:-)
Date: 3/11/2021 4:39:00 AM
The ending spells the essence--beautifully emotive and romantic.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/11/2021 6:53:00 AM
Thank you very much as always, my friend!
Date: 3/11/2021 1:29:00 AM
- Emotions that scream for their needs ... beautiful, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/11/2021 3:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)

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