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Shirlene's Three Days

Shirlene's Three Days Written: by Tom Wright A calm has come amidst a storm At last, at last, I've finally found. Peace came to me, as bees to swarm As fleas to an aging old hound. My burden scale reads faint to lifted Your sails are trimmed and course set true. Sad thoughts of you though oft I've sifted Have vanished like this mornings dew. Unpleasant memories I've interred deep Beyond my intellect bell's faint tingle. No more into my psyche dare they creep Or with my pleasant thoughts to mingle. But you haven't moved from our space You'll always be foremost on our minds. And in our heart's your special place Is still filled with a Godly love that binds. So when your life seems less up than down View those days as just another life test. Paste on a smile and chase that frown And seek God's help to just do your best.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/13/2016 4:46:00 AM
Hi Tom. Congrats for having your poem featured in the poetry soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/12/2016 2:44:00 PM
I loved the word choices, imagery, and message. I also have a deep appreciation for how it all unfolded. It was like having a birds eye view, and my mind was able to process it well.. :-)
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Date: 2/10/2016 4:09:00 PM
Real fine piece Tom, great message too.God bless, Gordon
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Date: 11/29/2008 9:19:00 PM
As fleas to an aging old hound - Fantastic poem with a wonderful ending - Congratulations on all three of your poems Tom - I'll read the next one - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 11/19/2008 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Tom. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2008 8:00:00 AM
Exquisite~!Brilliant in flow and rhythm and of course eloquence~ You have a WINNER here Tom...Mr.Wright~ All your words were so touching and true...a grandoise, and lovely inspirational piece my friend~ Congrats on being featured here at the SHHHHHOUPIE~! Your friend always.....jane;)
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Date: 6/13/2008 6:25:00 AM
Hello Tom I enjoyed reading this poem we all need these type of days. B BLESS Crystal
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Date: 6/11/2008 6:57:00 AM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to forward your thoughts in this inspirational poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/11/2008 5:45:00 AM
Congrats on this great write being featured. :) Cheers, Alana
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Date: 6/10/2008 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations Tom, on the featuring of your lyric "Shirlene's Three Days." Vince
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