Ships That Pass

He said "Don't you miss a man's touch?"
On reflection I had to admit as much.

Thus with my defences down,
he proceeded to erase my frown.

With teasing words and jolly banter,
until convulsed in raucous laughter.

The games we play with senses heightened.
I thought I might, but again I mightn't.

Burned too often, bitten twice.
His offer 'though, it sounded nice.

A man's touch indeed I miss.
That intimate, tingling first kiss.

In the end common sense prevailed.
On into the night his ship sailed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Shaw Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 4:55 PM
I love your poem Jean, my Ships were always on the distant horizon, Well apart from the one that anchored over 30 years ago. Kind regards, Kevin xx
Murray Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 7:46 AM
I see you struck gold Kevin. It must have been one of the Spanish Armada.
White Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 5:36 AM
I love this poem Jean (but sometimes.... AWAY with common sense, if only for a wee bit)
Murray Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 7:55 AM
Thank you Darren. I often have to say to myself "Get behind me Satan!"
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 1:58 AM
This poem was so delightful Jean! I still remember with regret the fellow I passed on in the night. A great dancer and even better kisser. : ) Loved your poem!
Murray Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Thank you Connie. Do you still have his number by any chance?
Michael Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Nice, at least you had a good time...Thanks for sharing...Enjoy your day
Murray Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 7:10 AM
Hello Arturo. It's true the thrill is often in the chase. It's a sunny Sunday here, so I think I'll go for a drive. I hope you also enjoy your day.
Allison Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 6:40 PM
I guess he didn't get to moor his boat that night then Jean... but never say never:-) hugs Jan xx
Murray Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 6:43 PM
"Moor his boat"....I feel a Limerick coming on Jan.....it's been a while.
Cozart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Thank God for common sense. The walk of shame is never pleasant. Besides, it throws your whole life off.
Cozart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 5:02 PM
No, sex isn't shameful. Quite the opposite. I think now you're right; having grown up in a puritan household I probably have just needed to shake off convention and the disapproval of my mother, my aunt, and my grandmother and anyone else whose duty it was to condemn young men for not being perfect!
Murray Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 4:48 PM
I'm not so sure Dale. Sex should never be shameful. And sometimes we need our life thrown off. Don't you think?
Turner Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 3:33 PM
This is a lovely little poem here, Jean. Better safe than sorry:)
Murray Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 3:36 PM
Ah yes Daniel, but they say to err is human.
Smith Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 3:12 PM
Maybe a goodbye kiss warranted next time.
Murray Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 3:17 PM
Oh NO Tim!! I couldn't trust myself....
Roper Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 2:45 PM
Oh, so sensual, Jean, then gone as fast as it came. Love the wonderful verse. ~*
Roper Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:45 PM
I found it,,,, With my memories I lit up the fire My troubles, my pleasures I don't need them anymore
Murray Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 3:03 PM
Oh Eve.... je ne regrette rien ??
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