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Ships That Pass

He said "Don't you miss a man's touch?" On reflection I had to admit as much. Thus with my defences down, he proceeded to erase my frown. With teasing words and jolly banter, until convulsed in raucous laughter. The games we play with senses heightened. I thought I might, but again I mightn't. Burned too often, bitten twice. His offer 'though, it sounded nice. A man's touch indeed I miss. That intimate, tingling first kiss. In the end common sense prevailed. On into the night his ship sailed.

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Date: 7/25/2017 4:55:00 PM
I love your poem Jean, my Ships were always on the distant horizon, Well apart from the one that anchored over 30 years ago. Kind regards, Kevin xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/26/2017 7:46:00 AM
I see you struck gold Kevin. It must have been one of the Spanish Armada.
Date: 7/24/2017 5:36:00 AM
I love this poem Jean (but sometimes.... AWAY with common sense, if only for a wee bit)
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2017 7:55:00 AM
Thank you Darren. I often have to say to myself "Get behind me Satan!"
Date: 7/24/2017 1:58:00 AM
This poem was so delightful Jean! I still remember with regret the fellow I passed on in the night. A great dancer and even better kisser. : ) Loved your poem!
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2017 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Connie. Do you still have his number by any chance?
Date: 7/23/2017 6:55:00 AM
Nice, at least you had a good time...Thanks for sharing...Enjoy your day
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/23/2017 7:10:00 AM
Hello Arturo. It's true the thrill is often in the chase. It's a sunny Sunday here, so I think I'll go for a drive. I hope you also enjoy your day.
Date: 7/22/2017 3:59:00 AM
Hi Jean , wow , beautifully described common sense ,, yes it is for good reason why a lot of people find it so hard to let there hair down , :::)))))))hugs
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/23/2017 7:06:00 AM
So you and George are twins Niall?? That explains a lot.
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/22/2017 6:44:00 AM
Hi Niall.
Date: 7/21/2017 6:40:00 PM
I guess he didn't get to moor his boat that night then Jean... but never say never:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 6:43:00 PM
"Moor his boat"....I feel a Limerick coming on Jan.....it's been a while.
Date: 7/21/2017 4:38:00 PM
Thank God for common sense. The walk of shame is never pleasant. Besides, it throws your whole life off.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 7/21/2017 5:02:00 PM
No, sex isn't shameful. Quite the opposite. I think now you're right; having grown up in a puritan household I probably have just needed to shake off convention and the disapproval of my mother, my aunt, and my grandmother and anyone else whose duty it was to condemn young men for not being perfect!
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 4:48:00 PM
I'm not so sure Dale. Sex should never be shameful. And sometimes we need our life thrown off. Don't you think?
Date: 7/21/2017 3:33:00 PM
This is a lovely little poem here, Jean. Better safe than sorry:)
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 3:36:00 PM
Ah yes Daniel, but they say to err is human.
Date: 7/21/2017 3:12:00 PM
Maybe a goodbye kiss warranted next time.
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 3:17:00 PM
Oh NO Tim!! I couldn't trust myself....
Date: 7/21/2017 2:45:00 PM
Oh, so sensual, Jean, then gone as fast as it came. Love the wonderful verse. ~*
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/21/2017 9:45:00 PM
I found it,,,, With my memories I lit up the fire My troubles, my pleasures I don't need them anymore
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Jean Murray
Date: 7/21/2017 3:03:00 PM
Oh Eve.... je ne regrette rien ??

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