Ship of Fools

On a ship of fools without direction, Along a circuitous trajection, Sailors from every land and nation Drift not by chart, but hallucination, And their lofty voices, at once speaking A bit louder than the planks are creaking, Floating forever on waves, so giggly, Along a foamy blue course, so squiggly - Or will their cruise end, as the surf goes splash, And they laugh madly, while on rocks they crash?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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May 4, 2024 at 10:26 AM
Your poem vividly captures the metaphorical journey of life as a voyage on a ship of fools. The imagery of sailors from diverse backgrounds drifting aimlessly without direction paints a poignant picture of the human condition, where individuals navigate through life's uncertainties guided not by reason or purpose, but by illusion and folly.
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May 4, 2024 at 2:09 PM
Thanks Silent One, well put!
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May 4, 2024 at 7:31 AM
Excellent poem on the subject of being physically and figuratively disoriented and lost. The idea of being aimless, with no real purpose in life and only one's own desires and delusions to lead them is very well explored.
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May 4, 2024 at 10:00 AM
Thanks, Sotto Poet!
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