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Shiny the Sunbeam Parody Contest

Shiny the Sunbeam Was a Summer sunshine rose With a visor hat and a ruddy glow And sunglasses on his nose Shiny the Sunbeam Is radiation they say He was made of a UV But all the adults see Is their tan on holiday There must have been some magic in That new lotion they found For when they slathered it on No longer do they go brown Shiny the Sunbeam Is radiation they say He was made of a UV But all the adults see Is their tan on holiday

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David Drowley

Date: 1/8/2024 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Very cute.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/8/2024 12:43:00 PM

Thank you

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/5/2024 4:50:00 PM

That’s so good Dilly, I sang the song as I read it. Congratulations on your top win in Miranda’s contest… Belle

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/7/2024 2:55:00 AM

Thank you Belle. I just sang it to my daughter this morning - they weren't impressed haha, maybe that was my singing :) thanks for your kind comment x

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/4/2024 8:30:00 AM

So cute. and true. love it. Congrats to you on top win. God bless you too. Love, Gina

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/4/2024 2:50:00 PM

Thank you Gina, appreciated x

Miranda Hawley

Date: 1/4/2024 8:10:00 AM

This got a FAV from me. Congrats on your top win in my contest!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/4/2024 2:50:00 PM

Thank you Miranda, I'm so pleased you liked it so much. I put a lot of focus on the idea it could be sang to the tune as you asked x thank you for the fav and placement x

David Kavanagh

Date: 12/28/2023 1:44:00 PM

You ain’t wrong about Shiny the Sunbeam Dilly, this one has a frightful amount of ironic truth, with a very pertinent moral that this adult should pay more attention to on holiday, intelligent writing as always, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/28/2023 3:15:00 PM

Oh David... Erm. I should have forewarned you I was taking my poetic voice in a new direction :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 12/27/2023 11:35:00 PM

Adorable, and fits Frosty the snowman PERFECTLY. Every word fits the tune exactly. You are an amazing poet to be able to do this and make it look so easy. This has got to be a winner. No-one could do better ! So clever to make up a character, the opposite of a snowman. Well done D. A fave for me.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/27/2023 11:44:00 PM

Haha I'm having an existential crisis over here about the fact he doesn't have a nose for the sunglasses... I think this might have been one of the most difficult contests I've done :) thanks for the feedback - I'll send you a video of me singing it :)