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Shining Like the Dawn

M-ake it shine like the dawn, A-llow your life to glow; R-emain firm and faithful I-n the midst of sorrow. N-either hand touches dirt nor both feet go astray; A-llow your mind to think of true and righteous way. M-ake it shine like the dawn O-f the day in good weather; R-aindrops cease to fall I-n twenty-seventh October. L-et your soul serve the Lord, L-et negligence be gone; O-nly the obedient child is shining like the dawn.

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Date: 11/14/2016 8:00:00 PM
I like the format, it was a little different, it was very much fun to read and very easy to understand.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 11/14/2016 8:41:00 PM
Thanks, John, for stopping by.... Thanks for the comment.. It means a lot to me.... God bless.....

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