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Shining a Light

You captivate me with your ambiance- even inside my misguided muse I seek you with all that my soul has to offer. I’m hypnotized by the way you look at me without searching for my becoming flaws, astounded that the strength in your touch can make me weak without warning. You say I am opulent; abundant in beauty- I wonder if you know you are the magic that holds the stars up in the eventide sky. You bring a clarity into my life showing me what's truly right, denouncing what's wrong, shining a light into my shadows; you have brought meaning into a world that I had thought was meaningless, telling me you are incomplete without me. My essence sparkles when you are near- brighter than any celestial being. My existence melts into your warm softness taking my breath from this magic we create. October 21, 2019 A poetess collaboration

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Date: 11/16/2019 12:36:00 PM
Congrats to both of you, I can't tell who wrote what, it's a seamless write, a testament to both of you and your immense talent!
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Date: 11/14/2019 8:41:00 PM
Congrats to both of you. This is beautiful!
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Date: 11/14/2019 4:10:00 PM
"Congratulations" This was magic................
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Date: 11/14/2019 3:31:00 PM
Congrats!! to all sissys involved lol...Bren and Luloo...:o)...you girls packed a wallop...
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Date: 11/14/2019 2:52:00 PM
Congratulations to both of you very well deserved
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Date: 11/14/2019 2:48:00 PM
Well congratulations my dear friend!;) I think we did pretty good!;) anytime you want to collab lol just let me know because I really enjoyed it!;)
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Date: 11/14/2019 1:59:00 PM
What a wonderful collaboration between two great poets.. is this what they call girl power? Great lines in both parts... The aim of this contest was not how high someone places, it was to introduce poets who do not enter contests.... Thanks for taking part..
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Date: 10/22/2019 8:13:00 AM
((((Wowsers))))...beautifully & elegantly executed by two great poetesses...I bow(with tears running down my face)...and very honored to part of your presence...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/21/2019 11:34:00 AM
Laura it truly was my pleasure to write with you! Thank you for that push of confidence you give!;)
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Date: 10/21/2019 11:38:00 AM
thank you too! Everyone deserves lifting up and encouragement (especially you sweet lady) I am honored and grateful you accepted my offer for a collab for this contest. Be blessed :)-luloo

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