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Hours contemplated, yet words just cease to come, Until I open my eyes and gaze at dawn’s sun I remember words spoken in a haze of a dream, Resting on the thoughtful tongue passed from you to me Ignorance for many a time drew shadows upon my brow, But as moments gain importance, I smile upon the Now I thank God for the present, the future and the past I thank God for you—may your happiness ever last This heart is so keen on showing you the reflection of your light There’s so much more to you, but the little I know is bright Such a beautiful, priceless wisdom we so closely share Despite the distance, we have a connection beyond compare That connection inspires these very words I see them in the eyes of larks, in the wings of the birds And as they take to the sky blue pink heavens, The sun stands still between two mountains in reverence There’s a certain shine there taken far with the breeze, Stirring every morning whisper on the leaves of the trees It is there I seek the gleam of a wondrous green eye A bedazzling spark spirals as transparent as the sky That shine grows whenever thought traces your shade, Leading me to a place where splendor never fades I cannot quite fathom why these words do surmise Even now as I write, they take me by surprise These sentiments become clouded in darkness at times Emotion cries for significance and words just lose their rhymes But still they flourish, like the bud of the midnight rose Blooming for daytime dimples and lofty cock-crows Through adventurous verse of glorious morning song, There’s a trust so small that you will tag along Understand that I write only to lift you far Hoping this will reach the heights to where you are Each eye sees differently, yet few minds connect Few hearts allow such ardent light to reflect You are good, and hold a powerful array One that spreads color, a sunset to end the day You may find many fortresses falling all around, But you remain kind and strong, lifting those that are down It must be in your nature, or in the paths you roam Even as many come to ruins, hope is etched on every stone That hope remains in you and it need not be said That it is the life you live—the very ground you tread You are one of few favorite thoughts of mine Your words are clever and your smile is divine I look forward to every single night, Picturing your smile as you walk into the light And I always thank God for you and pray That you will always shine, each and every day
1/11/13 to DW

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Date: 2/14/2015 7:43:00 PM
To share a shine that lusters the soul...to taste the lather of secret and subtle sweetness is a gift of hearts beating in sacred romsnce Laura. Your special eyes know the song of love's tear and triumph. "You may find fortresses falling all around, but you remain kind and strong...blooming for daytime dimples and lofty cock crows...Resting on thoughtful tongue passed from me to you..." this great poem expresses how I feel about you, your poetry is a shine for me, Happy Valentine's Day...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/16/2015 2:57:00 PM
Such a sweet message, Justin...thanks very much! All of your poetry brings me great joy..I'm glad you can find the sunshine in my verses. You mean a lot to me great poet! ~Laura
Date: 1/20/2014 6:04:00 PM
Laura, Laura, Laura....I LOVED this poem of yours....I was captivated by it....This person you write of...Are they human or divine? Wow! To be a fortress builder, an encourager, a reflector of light.....to shine. Really, honestly....You swept me away with this. Wish I could be this type of person. Hugs.
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Date: 1/17/2014 3:31:00 AM
A really beautiful poem. some really great lines. A joy to read. thank you for sharing. wonderful. best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 1/17/2014 3:31:00 AM
A really beautiful poem. some really great lines. A joy to read. thank you for sharing. wonderful. best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 1/16/2014 5:48:00 PM
Just brilliant! I love the rhyme, and the flow of your words here, which seemed so effortless. The imagery that you painted in this poem was stunning! A truly wonderful piece of poetry, Laura!...Thank you so much for the lovely and encouraging comments. I really do appreciate it!
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Date: 1/15/2014 4:50:00 PM
As I read this all I could think of was Bob Dylan or perhaps a Joni Mitchell song. So deep and intimate. Giving yourself up to the song/poem. You have a great talent my dear. Don't let love tear it apart. ~Kilmer
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Date: 1/15/2014 1:14:00 AM
All I can say is... That was read with pure delight! :o)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/15/2014 1:25:00 AM
Sure hope he'll think so too... thanks Dan. It's great to hear from you!~Laura
Date: 1/14/2014 12:43:00 PM
A beautiful poem Laura, it's amazing what the light can do to us. I will miss your epic, writes for the time being... Hope is all we got sometimes.... See you later, my poetic friend.. Linda
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Date: 1/13/2014 10:48:00 PM
Amen! I couldn't help to say that....what an inspirational poem. Thanks for your kind and encouraging words on my page.
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Date: 1/13/2014 10:44:00 PM
Excellent write Laura....loved it
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