Shikata ga nai

In an old bus, patience thinned by 
  midnight
As bitterness drifted long, feeling bleak
Wiping hours with restless air in 
 dark light
Not a robin cooed through skyline's 
  mystique
 
Finding unrest from a breeze in dull 
   shade
Where time slept with eyes open, a pale 
   flow,
A peasant beside me smiled like 
   glittered jade
Changing my face with some kind of 
  halo.
 
His ruffled hair touched my skin.   
  without words
And I felt silence soothing my 
   complaint;
Reaching out to offer him bread I 
  stored;
He said, "life's a pit if that's how it's named."
 
That moment pierced my gall, a quitter I 
   was--
Buoyed; epiphany changed my
   senseless flaws.
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Gasun Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 6:04 AM
You do very well in all poem types my dearest poet sis, not only on prose, free verses but rhymes too especially on sonnet, my favorite one. An excellent and touching write this one with great life's message to impart. Big warmest Congrats on your well-deserved super/first win ! Hugging this masterpiece and you.
George Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 7:11 PM
So profound... ! Some moments come into us as an epiphany! Congratulations Nette on your first place win.
Seeker Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 6:03 PM
Deep and so meaningful, masterfully penned, Nette, warmest congratulations on your top win
One Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 11:48 AM
I loved how creative this one was as a sonnet.. Congratulations on your first place and thank you for writing for my contest.
Hind Avatar
November 8, 2024 at 6:56 PM
A fav this is for me! Wow, Nette, this was so amazing and written so, so well.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 10:17 AM
What a wonderful write you have here. Have a wonderful day...............
Cunningham Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 10:54 PM
Enjoyable read Nette with a message of hope. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Empress Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 12:50 PM
Dear Nette, youv captured delivered the essence of how one simple act, or moment can change the view of one, and how it can be calming and uplifting. Very well written on transformation. I love the opening especially and how it ended. Pleasure reading you today.~ sending you light always
Kyser Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 8:37 AM
Nice writing - I enjoyed your sonnet!
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