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Shikata ga nai

In an old bus, patience thinned by midnight As bitterness drifted long, feeling bleak Wiping hours with restless air in dark light Not a robin cooed through skyline's mystique Finding unrest from a breeze in dull shade Where time slept with eyes open, a pale flow, A peasant beside me smiled like glittered jade Changing my face with some kind of halo. His ruffled hair touched my skin. without words And I felt silence soothing my complaint; Reaching out to offer him bread I stored; He said, "life's a pit if that's how it's named." That moment pierced my gall, a quitter I was-- Buoyed; epiphany changed my senseless flaws.

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Date: 11/12/2024 6:04:00 AM
You do very well in all poem types my dearest poet sis, not only on prose, free verses but rhymes too especially on sonnet, my favorite one. An excellent and touching write this one with great life's message to impart. Big warmest Congrats on your well-deserved super/first win ! Hugging this masterpiece and you.
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Date: 11/10/2024 7:11:00 PM
So profound... ! Some moments come into us as an epiphany! Congratulations Nette on your first place win.
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Date: 11/10/2024 6:03:00 PM
Deep and so meaningful, masterfully penned, Nette, warmest congratulations on your top win
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Date: 11/10/2024 11:48:00 AM
I loved how creative this one was as a sonnet.. Congratulations on your first place and thank you for writing for my contest.
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Date: 11/8/2024 6:56:00 PM
A fav this is for me! Wow, Nette, this was so amazing and written so, so well.
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Date: 11/1/2024 10:17:00 AM
What a wonderful write you have here. Have a wonderful day...............
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Date: 10/30/2024 10:54:00 PM
Enjoyable read Nette with a message of hope. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 10/30/2024 12:50:00 PM
Dear Nette, youv captured delivered the essence of how one simple act, or moment can change the view of one, and how it can be calming and uplifting. Very well written on transformation. I love the opening especially and how it ended. Pleasure reading you today.~ sending you light always
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Date: 10/30/2024 8:37:00 AM
Nice writing - I enjoyed your sonnet!
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