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Shh...Secrets

Secrets A drop of silence. A long road into conscience. Fear is frightened. My whispers moist the mirror, I have been talking to; lips move. A sweep with my hand reveals me, at least partially; eyes, nose… The broken images look like an unborn soul with unfulfilled desire, to be born and thrive. My wishes, of reversing time and walk backwards to the root, set me alight; I see secrets being destroyed in that fire. © 2009 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar

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Date: 7/23/2009 3:30:00 AM
great is the idea of being born again!
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Date: 7/18/2009 5:24:00 PM
A lot of depth in this concise piece. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/15/2009 2:58:00 AM
kushal its an awesome composition.depicts your yearning to get one with the ultimate soul.brillant!!!!
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Date: 7/14/2009 2:08:00 PM
Kushal, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/13/2009 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2009 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on this featured poem and enjoy the honor. God bless. Ernilando
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Date: 7/12/2009 11:12:00 PM
Hey! This is Emotional. Wow, Great flow of words, this is a very in piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke
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Date: 6/12/2009 10:04:00 AM
Are you frightened? Certainly fear is not frightened it is constructed of fright? Do not long for the past make a better future ;) a thought full write! Light & Love
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Date: 6/6/2009 9:25:00 PM
Indeed, we all hold secrets to everyone, even to ourselves, and whenever we go fishing, the real thinking process, prosecuted by metallic spheres into the ocean, silence, solitude, those secrets are usually revealed; thanks a lot for the experience, your writing is great =D
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