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"The Lord Is My Shepherd" painting by Morgan Weistling

The little lamb and his shepherd went on a long journey. The lamb wanted for nothing. When nights were cold, the shepherd held the lamb close for warmth. When paths were steep or treacherous, the shepherd carried the lamb to safety. When the lamb grew weary from the journey, the shepherd would find a safe, green pasture to rest in. When the lamb grew hot and thirsty, the shepherd would guide him to the refreshing cool waters of a quiet stream. One time, at dusk, they approached a dark valley. The path was rocky and narrow, and in places seemed to disappear. The lamb said to the shepherd, "I can't go through that valley; I'm afraid I might fall, and be devoured by wolves that live in the bushes". The shepherd said, "Do not lose hope, my lamb, for I am with you. My rod will fight off any evil beast, and my staff will catch you if you fall and will pull you to safety." "What if I lose my way?" asked the lamb. "I AM the way", smiled the shepherd. "Stay with me and you will be kept safe". Another time, as the shepherd applied some healing oil to a wound near the lamb's ear, a family of mountain lions approached, growling, staring at the lamb, hungrily licking their lips. Holding up his rod, the shepherd looked each beast in the eye, and not one dared to approach. He handed the lamb a cup overflowing with tasty hay and pasture as their enemies watched from a distance. For the rest of the journey, the shepherd instructed the lamb with words of wisdom and comfort regarding the many pitfalls life may bring. At last, the shepherd and lamb came to a wide river. The shepherd said, "little lamb, it is time for you to cross this river without me. On the other side is my father's house where you are to dwell all your days. There are no wild beasts there, nor thorny brambles, nor wounds, hunger, or thirst. Swim across in peace, for surely goodness and mercy will follow you, and the great Spirit will guide you and protect you in my absence. I must go and prepare a place for you. Do you trust me, my lamb?" The lamb said to his shepherd, "All my life, you have been the guardian of my way. You have fed me, watered me, guided me, and risked your life to protect me. Your words are the words of life. With the hope you have given me, the courage you have modeled for me, and the wisdom you have taught me, I will endeavor to trust you always."
my faith is a lamb the Lord is the Good Shepherd worthy of my trust
(a re-imagining of the 23rd Psalm)

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Date: 8/16/2020 2:42:00 PM
Hmmm, is the river a metaphor of being alone on earth then? Or the traveling to heaven after death? I admire your great faith in the Lord, John. Great job with this re-envisioning of 23rd Psalm. Looks like you wrote this a whole month ago. Was it for a contest? Love the picture you put with it too.
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John Watt
Date: 5/25/2022 2:20:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. The river is symbolic of the dividing line between present existence and the promised land on the other side. I appreciate your read and comment, as always ~ John
Date: 7/23/2020 4:00:00 AM
"All my life, you have been the guardian of my way. You have fed me, watered me, guided me, and risked your life to protect me. Your words are the words of life. With the hope you have given me, the courage you have modeled for me, and the wisdom you have taught me, I will endeavor to trust you always." ~Magical~ May God bless you, you who is His most loyal follower. Nicely done.
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Date: 7/24/2020 7:07:00 PM
You are so kind with all your comments, my friend. Thank you, this was a very thoughtful message.
Date: 7/17/2020 2:36:00 PM
A rather beautiful rendering of psalm 23 John, excellent penning indeed. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 7/17/2020 2:56:00 PM
Blessings to you as well, my friend. Thank you for the kind comment. Trust you and Christine are doing well.
Date: 7/17/2020 12:39:00 AM
Beautiful, John, I am awe-struck by its profound truth:) it's a winner in my eyes:)
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Date: 7/17/2020 2:04:00 AM
Thank you, dear Jo. Your affirmation means a lot to me. Have a blessed day, my friend ~ John
Date: 7/16/2020 10:05:00 PM
Brings tears to my eyes, John. Really...For ages, shepherds, -- hand-picked by God for their qualities of kindness, humility, and bravery -- became the leaders of large flocks of men, women and children. Both Jacob, whose name was changed to Israel, and his favorite son, Joseph, were shepherds. Moses too was a shepherd prior to his pivotal encounter with God at the Burning Bush, where he most reluctantly assumed the leadership of a nation-to-be of 3,000,000... Peace, Gershon
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Date: 7/16/2020 10:46:00 PM
And let's not forget David, who slew bears, lions, and giants. I'm very grateful for your response, Gershon. I'm glad you were able to connect with my shepherd write so deeply. Thank you for your amazing comment, my friend ~ John
Date: 7/16/2020 12:58:00 PM
John simply beautiful, an awesome Haibun - Often at a sermon the priest will tell us a similar story, it is always beautiful to hear of absolute faith and trust in the Good Shepherd. Lovely John. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/16/2020 6:38:00 PM
Jennifer, thank you so much for taking time to read my long story and then leave a friendly comment. Very generous of you, and much appreciated! God bless your day, my friend ~ John
Date: 7/16/2020 5:55:00 AM
We're all lost as sheep without the guidance and protection of a Shepherd. Your Haibun is a fantastic tribute to the Divine. Thank you, John.
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Date: 7/16/2020 9:58:00 AM
Jenna, thank you for taking time to read one of my longer writes. It's the sign of a friend, and I appreciate the visit and the kind words.
Date: 7/16/2020 2:10:00 AM
Beautifully composed John, your faith shines through in your haibun. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 7/16/2020 2:23:00 AM
Thank you, my friend. I hope you do one as well, I should like very much to read it. ~ John

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