Shenanigans

A clatter in the backyard loudly drew my attention. Curious to witness the commotion, I rushed to look out my patio door and saw a scurry of impish squirrels. I'd hung a new bird feeder, tauntingly just out of reach, and they were determined to conquer it. Intrigued by their lively shenanigans, I sat in a chair and started to watch. Failing to gain a foothold, they began using their wits. I laughed at their nimble, clever antics, as they improvised alternative ways to ultimately claim their just reward. One kept leaping off the roof, yet it would always fall short. But failure could never halt their mission, and sure enough, one tried it from a tree, landing smack on the feeder with a thump. And they both came crashing down; backyard squirrels are tenacious.
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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Hi friend, like your poetry form. Want to try it for your contest... but confused.Did I read right above ... non-rhyme. Which this was. But thought the contest rules said, rhyme must be a true rhyme? Please soup mail me to rhyme, or not to rhyme please. Thank you! bbn
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Thanks, Barbara, my (Seven Ten) form is a no-rhyme format....in my contest description I state that for any form that does require rhyme, I only accept true rhyme. I hope this explains this for you, if not please SoupMail me, my friend, Emile.
Hawley Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:33 PM
I like this little story! Great job.
Pinet Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 5:02 PM
Thanks, Miranda; I appreciate it, my friend; Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 1:05 PM
So cool. It's story telling form, kind of like the choka contest going on!
Pinet Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 2:08 PM
Thanks, Andrea; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.
Poteet Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 8:24 AM
Delightful, indeed. Love watching animals at play, particularly birds building (or trying to) nests.
Pinet Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 8:26 AM
Thanks, Reason; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 7:04 AM
Emile, so delightful, I can see it all happening, just wonderful for the contest, best of luck, God Bless !
Pinet Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 8:25 AM
Thanks, Constance, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Daniel Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 2:06 AM
They are fun to watch, Emile, but destructive when it comes to fruit trees:) great poem:)
Pinet Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 7:24 AM
Thanks, Joanna, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 10:55 AM
they are very acrobatic and wily indeed Emile, we have none on our Island so I enjoyed reading your descriptive poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 12:10 PM
Thanks, Jan, I didn't know there were no squirrels on the Isle of Man, interesting, I just took it for granted they where everywhere...I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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