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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/15/2011 4:58:00 AM

That is a great array of words, very nicely done and presented...love Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2011 5:36:00 PM

Wilma, what does OMW mean? I am so retarded about the new lingo. haha. LUv, andrea

James Fraser

Date: 1/11/2011 9:57:00 AM

Beautiful Senryu Wilma, so full of emotion....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/11/2011 9:29:00 AM

The reader can sense the comfort of a quilt made of beautiful words and thoughts, Wilma. Sooo creative. Great senryu, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/10/2011 7:10:00 PM

As good as any other quality senryu. Not a lot of words, but lots of good descriptiveness.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2011 5:49:00 PM

Sweet Wilma, nice thoughts.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2011 4:27:00 PM

A very cozy little senryu, Wilma!! Full of comort.

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/10/2011 2:38:00 PM

Hi Wilma, I am happy to have you smile with "postcards" I like what you did here with "Sheltered" The entire poem has a warm feeling to it. Great work, Jancarl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2011 1:25:00 PM

Such a warm feeling this one gives..Enjoyed..Your presence at my work brought in a ray of sun..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/10/2011 1:03:00 PM

Nice feelings of content, Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/10/2011 12:04:00 PM

so lovely Wilma and that blanket of thoughts is a key line to this senryu... images beyond wonderful my friend.. luv..