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Sheltered

We stood hand over heart as the flag was unfurled We were sheltered from the real world All men are created equal is what they did teach Never realizing, they don’t practice what they preach Who said poor? We were rich beyond our dreams Working to make ends meet, endlessly, it seems There were Italians and Jews, Lithuanians and Greeks Puerto Ricans and Poles, Germans and Dutch No matter what your nationality or color was We were neighbors. So, it didn’t matter much I have memories of neighbors walking in our front door Nobody knocking, just dropping in I have memories of children playing on the parlor floor Nobody judging the color of skin Our riches were neighbors. Affluence carried no weight We were sheltered from bigotry, sheltered from hate God bless the children who knew neither hatred nor fear God damn the people who brought those things here When there is acceptance beyond what the eyes see Then perhaps we can call this the land of the free When there is truly no master and truly no slave Then perhaps we can call this the home of the brave We need to see the unity we’ve not had in the past If we continue to hate, our country can’t last If the American people can stand side by side Then we can restore our American pride When we stand together, again we’ll be strong And we can be sheltered from all that was wrong

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/7/2009 4:27:00 PM
this is truly powerful. God bless the children who knew neither hatred nor fear God damn the people who brought those things here" intense & raw honesty. something i can agree with 100%. a great powerful write.
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Date: 2/20/2009 11:24:00 AM
wow-- powerful and intense write
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Date: 2/18/2009 11:20:00 AM
I was raised by a totally bigoted grandfather and it seems to have not affected me ... maybe its my Aquarian nature ... smile ... I remember asking him when I was about 8 why he called our neighbors "spicks" and he told me, "Don't get smart young lady." Well, smart I got and bless his heart, he died in ignorance and thats just the way life goes ... smile ... can you tell this write got me going ... LOL ... P.S. We'll never be "sheltered" ... just enlightened ... smile
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Date: 2/16/2009 2:13:00 PM
Brilliant!
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Date: 2/16/2009 12:24:00 AM
A patriotic poem Vince. Nothwithstanding ..your openess is still admired in the free world.As a people you still have a great example to give.Have a good day & thanks for your blog comment.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/14/2009 4:24:00 PM
very powerful poetry vince. you always pack each piece with emotion. very well penned-love and peace:james
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Date: 2/13/2009 1:10:00 PM
Vince, what a powerful verse! I hope we will all join hands to reduce the suicide rates among American soldiers in the Mideast. As your poem implies, we need to have a sense of unity again and I'm hoping our new president can work some magic. Carolyn
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Date: 2/13/2009 12:00:00 PM
A very powerful write, Vince! Certainly one to read several times to get the full impact of your words. Could we but see through the hearts and eyes of children, there would be far less "hatred" and "bigotry". Their minds are like desk blotters. We need to adjust the ink that is spilled, so that they can soak up goodwill and kindness. Okay.I get the gist of this poem, I hope my comment makes sense to you?:) Happy Valentine's Day...Love, Mikki
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Date: 2/12/2009 7:54:00 PM
Yes, and amen! This is a brilliant write, Vince! I agree so completely with your message here. Hugs, Donna G.
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Date: 2/11/2009 6:59:00 PM
Vince if this poem offends anyone then they are bigots. These are strong words that people need to get behind and support. God made us all equal, no matter the color or the thickness of your wallet. We all feel pain, we all need love and we all bleed red, Blessings Ron
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Date: 2/11/2009 2:13:00 PM
Wonderful job of putting it our there..I did not grow up seeing anyone of a different skin color..but I was given a foundation that made race irrelevant. My grandson has friends of every color and creed..hes not quiet old enough to understand this write but when he is I'm going make sure he reads it. What a wonderful talent you have. BG
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Date: 2/11/2009 1:38:00 PM
If only we could truly be the land of the free and the brave....easy how we say it, but why does it have to be so difficult for people to live by it in their daily lives? WEll done, Vince!! You say what needs to be repeated over and over! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/11/2009 12:37:00 PM
Ha ha! I am laughing at Danielle's comment! No matter what party, your poetry always speaks the truth about what's right and what matters. You write it with deep emotion and great pride. You touch on the crux of what makes, or what should make, this country so great. Not to mention a little bit of awesome writing talent which helps makes your voice heard deeply and ring true within us all. Love this write! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/11/2009 10:38:00 AM
FRIGGING AWESOME POEM, my friend. I think you are a closet liberal! *****Danielle******
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Date: 2/11/2009 8:59:00 AM
Vince excellent rhyme and flow made the profound message in this poem standout even more - this poem was excellent in every sense of the word - Your poetry is just simply amazing - I hope that all is well with you and those who share your heart - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/11/2009 8:12:00 AM
i cannot agree any less with Micheal... love the message.. you have sent through your words!! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/11/2009 7:54:00 AM
Terrific! An end to ignorance is what we need and an end to hatred and to greed. Love the rhyme of this but the truth through your imagery is what I really love about this read. Michael
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