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Massachusetts isn’t close To Em and Henry’s farm But still, a twister landed there And did some major harm. My bro-in-law got an alert That shelter he should seek. They hurried to the basement But their dog began to freak. Now Waldo is a greyhound And has never mastered stairs. The warning was unusual And caught them unawares. So bro and sis-in-law and pup (Another family pet) Just waited without Waldo ‘Til the ending of the threat. The twister didn’t hit them; They were fortunate this time, But I think they have a reason To teach Waldo how to climb!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/6/2014 12:57:00 PM
I think they need a walk out basement. :) God Bless them. Peace. :)
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Date: 9/3/2014 7:23:00 AM
Dear Ilene, I'm so glad your brother's family survived the twister. Perhaps God was looking out for them. Indeed, Waldo needs to learn how to climb stairs. How sad it would be to lose a beloved pet. Your poem was written with style and compassion. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2014 7:17:00 PM
I love it, a delightful write. I'm glad they didn't have to say "where's Waldo"
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Date: 9/2/2014 4:38:00 PM
Thank you for your comments on my Labor Day poem. Is this poem about something that really happened? Please let me know. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 9/2/2014 5:30:00 PM
Hey Matthew! Almost all of my poems are based on things that really happened or observations about life. This one is no exception!

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