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Shell of a Nomad

I wanted to be alone tonight, to shuffle my thoughts in the ocean's breeze, when the sun sets sail, with the lights going out While I search the sky, in my solitude and ponder my place in the scheme of things... I wonder again, how I fit within... How the dreams I dream, and my many wiles, fit into the human chain In my lone meditation, there rises a sigh with a windswept aria, reaching my ears...... while one turtle I had noticed, is unmooring itself, heading back to the ocean, without hesitation not asking for much, not even for reason why I watch him slowly swagger along, no rush to marry a shell with the sea And envy how strong the urge can be, knowing his place in the throng His cares are so few, and with years to go, such tenacity captures me I wanted tonight, to be alone with thoughts, alone to doubt alone with my questions, and alone with my fears To hover in the shell, in the cave of my tears To ponder my place here among the stars..... Of time and space, the archaic shores Unmooring myself, across the sands If the turtle can see it, then I'm not alone in this span of a life, there is a journey long... a destiny that the nomad just knows __________________________________ 7/28/14 For Cyndi's Contest: "Turtles"

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Date: 8/8/2014 12:59:00 PM
Dear Carrie...truly a beautiful write and a unique approach to the contest theme. I love your poetry. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 8/8/2014 9:48:00 AM
Turtle bonding... There's a unique take! Beautifully rendered, as always. Well done. Congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 8/7/2014 11:14:00 PM
Your poem definitely belongs near the top, Carrie. It's wonderful and I enjoyed how you made it personal with the turtle. That's how i did mine kind of, though not as eloquently!! Congratulations.
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Date: 8/7/2014 5:48:00 AM
Back again wid big congrats on this wonderful winning write Carrie!
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Date: 8/7/2014 3:18:00 AM
turtle-nomad comparison, so beautiful Carrie. Congrats on the fine placement. Mohan
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:48:00 PM
I've been seeing a lot of poems for this contest today...yours is a winner for sure. It's really very piercing, you know...leaves me with not quite a sad feeling, but something close to it. You moved me...well done as always, Carrie. Hope you've been well!
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:39:00 PM
Dear Carrie, You are the princess of free verse. This poem brought tears to my eyes. Perhaps one day we will be as carefree as the turtle, but life does have its hard knocks and we need time like the night you described to recuperate. Hope you take first place! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:02:00 AM
Wonderful write Carrie ,, another brilliant one,, loved much !
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Date: 7/28/2014 11:20:00 PM
Oh wow Carrie, I think you really did a superb job with yours-- you've injected such beauty and meaning into yours, with an imagery that just stayed with me-- I especially loved the first couple of lines of your 3rd and 4th stanzas-- there are some poems sometimes, that makes you see things from a different perspective, and this is definitely one of them. This is such an introspective read for me, thank you. I hope this scores way up there in Cyndi's contest! Btw, I think she required a certain word in her title? Pls check her rules again, it would be such a shame if this doesn't place because of the title you used (loving your title though!)...will email again...
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 8/1/2014 10:59:00 AM
Happy to be of help, dear Carrie :)--- and hmm no, I think this is just one of my ways of making it up to you, for giving you such a hard time with my contests before-- talk to you soon, signed, sleepyhead
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Carrie Richards
Date: 7/29/2014 12:31:00 AM
Dear Nikko......thank you so much.....you always come to the rescue !! I smile when I see your name....(talk with you again soon!) :) hugs!!

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