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Sheeping With the Fishes

SHEEPING  WITH  THE   FISHES

Mouth open, closed  
Dull eyes not yet asleep
Ears out like small wings
Under woolly hair.  
His shining silvery jacket’s
Sharp pointed safety pins
Like hooks, wet looking, smooth
As in the deep. 
 
Slowly rattle as points creep
By and voice states next station
And moves the fish-sheep  -
He stands hooked to the rail.
Doors open, but still

I see him swinging, swimming
In a grassy field and weep
For the numberless      
Flock going home
Backs to the wind coming
From the Galloway hills steep.

Windows with passing crowds
Underwater aquarium dream deep 
Inside our Moby whale while
Door-mouths  open and close.
Endless crowd enters like sheep
To the slaughter.

Jonah and I await
God’s miracle promised to keep
When we walk out alive
And escalate to  the
World above, home, and sleep.
…………………………………………………………………

Note:    Written while watching a young man dozing on the
 homebound evening metro-train, crowded with tired commuters.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/29/2017 4:51:00 PM
love the title and the way you've described this young man on the train. i can picture it perfectly!
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