Nette Onclaud Poet Dodoitsu

Sheba Night

SHEBA NIGHT

my thighs pressed against your skin
shaping curves of evening's sail,
fingers fondling north of lips
to drink entire sea

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((for Michael J. Falotico's "Spicy" Contest))

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Lynn Marie April 10, 2017 at 5:21 PM ooh I love this sultry ambrosia nette:) the 'heat' rose from the feature page:) it's fun to discover oldies and this is a timeless classic in any year. lynnxxx

James Fraser April 3, 2011 at 6:13 AM Sheba Night delight, extremely sensuous Nette, and a total joy to read. Have a lovely Sunday....:) smiles

Sharon Ruebel January 24, 2011 at 1:28 PM Hello Nette, Congratulations on your win, this is indeed hot and spicy! As Always, Shar

Poet Destroyer A January 23, 2011 at 3:56 PM Nette**A late Congratulation~ on your #2 win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.

Debbie Guzzi January 23, 2011 at 6:30 AM ahhhh my number one ;) gotta watch all that passion! Congrad's on your most excellent evocative winning WRITE! Light & Love

Tahera Mannan January 22, 2011 at 7:35 PM wow Nette. Many wonderful congratulations for this win.

Robert Pettit January 22, 2011 at 7:11 PM Wonderful entry! No wonder you won.

Sara Kendrick January 22, 2011 at 2:51 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich January 22, 2011 at 1:23 PM This one was FANTABULOUS. a 7!! (and congratulations)

Wilma Neels January 22, 2011 at 9:04 AM Oh my my Nette, this sure has kicked up the temperature hehe.. Congratulations on your win in MF's contest ;)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 22, 2011 at 6:07 AM Congrats Nette on your super win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write and entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Michael J. Falotico January 22, 2011 at 6:00 AM Congrats Nette on your 2nd place in my first contest....always Michael

Kory Calhoun January 22, 2011 at 5:57 AM Hi Nette - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 15, 2011 at 5:27 AM nope-- this one is rapture ;) replied

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2011 at 1:17 PM Gorgeous, Nette, Sure to place!!

Carolyn Devonshire January 1, 2011 at 10:42 AM So sensual, Nette. Definitely very, very spicy! Love and best wishes for the contest, Carolyn

Caryl Muzzey January 1, 2011 at 9:53 AM Great write! Good luck in the contest. Caryl

Sara Kendrick January 1, 2011 at 9:44 AM Very passionate work..Reads like a winner for sure..Keep the creative pen flowing for us to enjoy..Sara

Poet Destroyer A January 1, 2011 at 12:47 AM wow! Nette,, enjoyed this,,good luck in the contest,.(( i gave the contest a try too)).p.d..

Dr.Ram Mehta December 31, 2010 at 5:56 PM Fingers fondling north of lips, very sensual expression, nette. happy New Year

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 31, 2010 at 2:26 PM Impressive Nette.. good luck in Michael's part of the contest ... so many awesome entries already my friend... this form is so unique and expressive... HNY ... and EVE...