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She Would Do Better Next Time

She told him of her predicament Forgetting that he wanted to fix things Always his own way All she wanted him to do was listen Instead he punched noses, made phone calls, Sent an email, screamed and hollered. She had known better. She knew he was not the one who could listen And sit back and do nothing, not trying to fix it. She would do better next time she vowed, but of course, she didn’t.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/19/2020 4:24:00 PM
Great story, Caren. Some guys are good listeners and then there's those that... :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/20/2020 2:52:00 AM
Most of them I know want to FIX IT for you. UGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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