She Was Free, At Last

~ The stones were many, though still he climbed, dismantling the mortar crusted wall, leaving rubble in his wake as he made his way to the top Breathless, this world beyond the border clung to its silence, imprisoned by apprehension tightly binding a heart fearful of opening, like a clay jar of secrets, brittle but sealed tightly in the deepest cavern of temptation locks fastened as he descended the other side slowly taking in his surroundings In the distance he could hear the defined thud of the bolt sliding snuggly into its chamber, the click of assorted latches in brassplate and silver midst echoed sighs contemplating wished for moans as delicate hands trembled What would come of this stranger peering, traversing the maze sculpted of thorned hedges and meandering lies heard lingering of past encounters Would he bare truth, could he be the one to break these chains of uncertainty, rusted of worry but loosened by desire When there he stood in the gateway, shrouded by iron bars of ornate woven design draped in a cloak of confidence, defiant of fear, gallant in approach Not bearing jewels nor golden trinkets, but offering honesty, words of love in truthful promises lined with forevers once unimaginable and she wept for the sun had risen, an amorous glow of crimson and amethyst blinding the sadness on a once forgotten horizon, proclaiming a new day… and she could see it, she could feel it and as he took her hand she knew as they walked towards it... she was free, at last Happy New Year everybody! ~

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Date: 1/14/2020 10:33:00 AM
Beautiful story, anything that sets a person free, has to be a profound write. I wonder what inspired you to write this story of courage to persist to find love through adversity, either side of the story. It kind of reminds me of my favourite DH quote:
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Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2020 10:39:00 AM
Thank you so much. It was inspired by a conversation I had with someone who felt trapped in the situation they were in and longed to be free so I sent a poetic hero to help. I am happy you liked this one.
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Date: 1/14/2020 10:33:00 AM
"One must learn to love, and go through a good deal of suffering to get to it... and the journey is always towards the other soul." Beautiful poem and story Chris. x
Date: 1/8/2020 11:37:00 AM
Your opening two lines are enough to make a reader continue, wondering what was so important that he had to climb among many stones. Intrigue increased as next he battled thorn hedges. A knight sworn to save a lady? But of course. What else would Sir Chris be doing, garbed in his cloak of confidence. Love the amethyst and crimson horizon. Sorry I missed this one, but I was away when you posted. No harm done now that I'm here and have read it.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/8/2020 12:46:00 PM
Thank you so very much Lin. I am thrilled you enjoyed this. I read your latest a little while ago and it made me think of this one.
Date: 1/6/2020 1:51:00 PM
A beautifully crafted piece that encompasses an incredible willingness to overcome obstacles to get to the heart of the matter, which is, indeed, the heart... :') A fave, my friend...
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Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2020 2:12:00 PM
Thank you again my friend for always saying such nice things about my work. I appreciate you HT.
Date: 1/3/2020 11:53:00 AM
I love the arduous climb to the top, and the crescendo at the end of a hopelessness gone forever. A magnificent poem and an absolute gem. Well penned my friend, Blessings, Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/3/2020 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer so very much. I am happy you found this one and enjoyed it so. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me.
Date: 1/2/2020 3:44:00 PM
I just love the way the poem cascades down, and how she met her prince, at last, all the very best for the New Year . . . ; )
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Chris Green
Date: 1/2/2020 4:02:00 PM
Thank you so very much.
Date: 1/2/2020 2:16:00 PM
- Chris, .... excellent ......... beautiful ..... - I'm losing my words ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/2/2020 2:18:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. Your kindness is always a gift to me that I will cherish. I appreciate you Anne-Lise
Date: 1/2/2020 2:05:00 PM
Happy New Year...I love.being here reading your beautiful poetry.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/2/2020 2:18:00 PM
Happy New Year Charmaine. And I love you being here because your kind comments always bring a huge smile to my face. : )
Date: 1/2/2020 12:57:00 AM
a fantastic piece of writing..! incredible writing.. :)
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Date: 1/2/2020 7:03:00 AM
Thank you so very much.
Date: 12/31/2019 11:52:00 PM
wow...what a beautiful poetic tale to end the year Chris... this is wonderfully crafted with such vivid imagery i could see it and hear it unfolding... bravo... Happy New Year to you my friend... may 2020 bring you blessings and happiness.. hugs
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Date: 1/2/2020 7:03:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on this lengthy piece. I am happy you stopped by my friend.
Date: 12/31/2019 5:59:00 PM
Beautifully written Chris. Freeing for anyone who reads this. Happy New Year :)
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Date: 1/2/2020 7:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi. I am happy you liked this one.
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