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She Walks

"She walks between this world and that ~ Searching but never finding though she goes on anyway Hoping, against all hope The smell of the wind will tell you She is out there searching away Moaning winds blow across the lands As the smell of her perfume pass's by It tell's you she is out there searching As shadows float across the moonlit skies Her teardrops drip as though they were midnight thunderstorms plummeting down She was all of 16 when she took his name It was the war that took him from her that day She had no idea till she seen the headstone She had come to sit beside her mother's grave She had loved to sit there like that all day There was a crow that just wouldn't go away As she turned to tell it to leave her sight She caught the name that was engraved She touches the headstone and weeps As she walks between this world and that Forever more !!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/27/2017 8:51:00 PM
So, I've been bad! I let work crush me. It has sapped my strength. I have a lot of pressure to deal with. Anyway, the spirit of loss is well described here. How difficult it is to accept what is so terrible. It's been hard for me to accept things that if wished I could have controlled. But alas, we can't control anyone else really. I do hope you are well, and that I have time to catch up on more of your inspirational work.
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Date: 12/29/2012 8:27:00 PM
Melancholy and mysterious! Great phrasing and fabulous imagery. BRAVO Debbie!! Best wishes, Keith
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 12/29/2012 10:53:00 PM
Thank you Keith ;}
Date: 8/6/2012 7:16:00 AM
May she never truly walk alone. May she know angels near to calm her fear.
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Date: 7/6/2012 6:50:00 AM
Great poem just edit in a few places and it will be perfect.
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/17/2012 5:37:00 PM
yes it does need a bit of editing,,,, I hesitated to put it up there in the first place,,, though I knew someone would suggest something,,, have a great day Sherese ;}
Date: 11/2/2011 2:31:00 PM
* “Her Precious Seems A Bit Haunted Perhaps * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Debbie * Walking Down That Familiar Highway Called Melancholy Muse * Yet Wait, I See A Sign Ahead That Reads * Love to Right * Love to Your Left * Love * Just Beyound The Hill * Excellent Poem * Splashed In Colours of Crimson Heart Beautiful * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 12/11/2011 11:34:00 PM
Hello my sarah ;} thank you for your always sweet words for my words ;}I wrote this from a picture!
Date: 10/24/2011 7:07:00 AM
I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Debbie. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 12/11/2011 11:38:00 PM
thank you Carol,, for your always sweet words for my poetry,, I'm glad they added a place where we can reply to reply's ;} ;}

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