She Walked- a Poem About My Life

She walked along life’s pathway
Dejected and alone
She walked along life’s pathway
Her course was yet unknown.
 
She passed by many people
Who wouldn’t even smile
She passed by many people
Who would not go the second mile.
 
She sighed and looked around her
The journey seemed so long
She sighed and looked around her
No one could sing her song.
 
She soon passed by Happyville
The people seemed alright
She soon passed by Happyville
She couldn’t spend the night.
 
She needed a happy pill
To get her through her day
She needed a happy pill
They wouldn’t let her stay.
 
She then passed by Strongville
The people seemed so tough
She then passed by Strongville
She wasn’t tough enough.
 
She rushed by Beautyville
They didn’t let her in
She rushed by Beautyville
She was plain and not thin.
 
She passed by Successville
The people with degrees
She passed by Successville
They’d bring her to her knees.
 
She passed by Churchville
The people there were saints
She passed by Churchville
They preached about constraints
 
She sat down and wondered
A tear rolled down her cheek
She sat down and wondered
Why she was so very weak.
 
She thought to just stay there
The world could pass her by
She thought to just stay there
It would be easier to die.
 
Just then he sat beside her
“You can lean on me!”
Just then he sat beside her
“There's much for you to see!”
 
He pulled her to her feet
He straightened up her hair
He pulled her to her feet
“There is beauty everywhere!”
 
He had learned the secret
It was no mystery
He had learned the secret
Contentville would set her free!
 
The people there were normal
They all had struggles too
The people there were normal
They’d make her feel brand new.
 
She walked along life’s pathway
She held on to his hand
She walked along life’s pathway
Glad that he could understand!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/6/2014 5:54:00 PM
I am honored to be the first to comment. This poem displays your depth of emotion and understanding of human beings. At times it is hard to know just where we fit in. I am glad you chose so well, we need not travel this world alone.
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