She Waits

The wind wisps through the sheer lace drapery masking the entrance of the arched window ruffling the flowing locks of her hazel hair poised she peers out from her red Kantha accent chair watching the children playing hop-scotch out on the old cobblestone drive reminding her of days gone by simpler times of beauty and innocence she smells the sweet fragrance of the brickellbush growing down below remembering her times by the sea and that fresh morning breeze she puts on her dark cherry lip gloss tasting what seems like Gram's homemade pie bringing her back to the time she brought you home sharing that first long tongue kiss she hears the baby robin calling to her mom telling her to hurry up with dinner bringing back memories of how you used to wait and kept waiting for each and every date she can feel her heart beating her pulse racing, her hands sweating as she waits, she waits for you to come to come and hold her heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/29/2015 2:39:00 PM
ohh, the sense of longing is deeply impressed.. love piece, tim!.. huggs
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Date: 4/29/2015 2:14:00 PM
- Beautiful poem, Tim - a feeling of new love ..... forever love! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/29/2015 12:11:00 PM
Tim, this poem sounds so good and I like it
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Date: 4/29/2015 5:00:00 AM
WoW ..I love the detailed descriptions in your poem...They describe so much of the senses that one is able to smell the furniture wood..taste the lip gloss..Hear the kids laughter whilst playing...Outstanding Tim...An excellent post which recall those childhood times... A favourite.[I have many books but no room i call a library..that would be wonderful..the one at the side in the pic] :.)
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Date: 4/29/2015 12:35:00 AM
Wonderful memories wrapped in lovely pictures, my friend. A "7" and I will stop back to read your work! Be Blessed, Brian
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