She Trades Her Wings

Fate holds her captive within its embrace, drifting through the fabric of time and space. For swaddled in an ebony cocoon, She can't shed her wings till the next full moon. Her beauty emphasizes her sad state, a creature of feelings; she chose her fate. And defiant to the bitter-sweet end, she remains rigid, refusing to bend. She'd fallen in love with a mortal man, and thus, her descent from on high began. For fairies have to be above such things, or lose their magic and gossamer wings. She should not have let this affair begin, returning his love was a grievous sin. But her heart's desire would not be denied: for her love was impossible to hide. Shedding her wings and immortality: her passion overrides reality. And she trades her wings for a human heart; even though it is tearing her apart.
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Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 9:13 PM
Sweet, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:31 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 5:13 PM
Congratulations Emile on your fine win with your beautifully written poem full of great imagery, rhythm and rhyme.
Pinet Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Thanks again Susan, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 3:14 PM
Smile, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
Pinet Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 3:45 PM
Thanks Broken, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 9:43 PM
Another great write, with fantastic rhymes, I always enjoy reading you Emile, congrats on another fine placement!
Pinet Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Thanks John, as always I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
White Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 10:42 PM
Beautiful, I love the fairy tales of angels and mermaids, a great metaphor for everything we need to give up during our life. Good luck in the contest.
Pinet Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Thanks Darren, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:44 PM
Hi Emile, your poem has very vivid imagery and the rhyme is awesome. I love how you tell the story so eloquently and poetically. Good luck in the contest! :)
Pinet Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 6:43 PM
Love the imagination in this poem--well articulated, a winning entry!
Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Thanks Vijay, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 5:30 PM
OH, wow, I see you made yours fallen for the same reason I did mine! But you gave more details. GREAT way to do it,Emile and nice seeing you again!
Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Thanks so much Andrea, great minds think alike...good luck my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 2:52 PM
A great poem for the Fallen Angel contest Emile! I hope it does well :)
Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 3:34 PM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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