She Trades Her Wings

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Fate holds her captive within its embrace, drifting through the fabric of time and space. For swaddled in an ebony cocoon, She can't shed her wings till the next full moon. Her beauty emphasizes her sad state, a creature of feelings; she chose her fate. And defiant to the bitter-sweet end, she remains rigid, refusing to bend. She'd fallen in love with a mortal man, and thus, her descent from on high began. For fairies have to be above such things, or lose their magic and gossamer wings. She should not have let this affair begin, returning his love was a grievous sin. But her heart's desire would not be denied: for her love was impossible to hide. Shedding her wings and immortality: her passion overrides reality. And she trades her wings for a human heart; even though it is tearing her apart.

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Date: 5/26/2018 9:13:00 PM
Sweet, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2018 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/2/2017 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations Emile on your fine win with your beautifully written poem full of great imagery, rhythm and rhyme.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/3/2017 8:04:00 AM
Thanks again Susan, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/2/2017 3:14:00 PM
Smile, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
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Date: 10/2/2017 3:45:00 PM
Thanks Broken, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/1/2017 9:43:00 PM
Another great write, with fantastic rhymes, I always enjoy reading you Emile, congrats on another fine placement!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/2/2017 9:26:00 AM
Thanks John, as always I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/20/2017 10:42:00 PM
Beautiful, I love the fairy tales of angels and mermaids, a great metaphor for everything we need to give up during our life. Good luck in the contest.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/21/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Darren, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/20/2017 9:44:00 PM
Hi Emile, your poem has very vivid imagery and the rhyme is awesome. I love how you tell the story so eloquently and poetically. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/21/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/20/2017 6:43:00 PM
Love the imagination in this poem--well articulated, a winning entry!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/20/2017 7:25:00 PM
Thanks Vijay, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/20/2017 5:30:00 PM
OH, wow, I see you made yours fallen for the same reason I did mine! But you gave more details. GREAT way to do it,Emile and nice seeing you again!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/20/2017 7:25:00 PM
Thanks so much Andrea, great minds think alike...good luck my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/20/2017 2:52:00 PM
A great poem for the Fallen Angel contest Emile! I hope it does well :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/20/2017 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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