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She Touched the Water

She Touched The Water My muse touched the waters of a spring fed river She had a special gift to deliver Releasing the inspiration from deep within her She said “ Drink please witness about saint and sinner. Surrender your mind become a true believer. The line between real and fantasy, you can make it thinner.” So with my cupped hands I began to deeply drink Muted greys became a vibrant pink Thoughts and ideas were transformed into ink It was all so fantastic those things I could think She said “Write them all down or they’ll be gone in a blink.” Not all thoughts were happy some they made my heart sink. The more I drank the more I was elated Oh how easily I concentrated Ideas expressed tales of wonder consecrated Secretly I craved being congratulated What was written felt solid those things I created Wise, wonderful words emotionally weighted Wanting more and more I couldn’t be sated My magical muse began to worry about me Who I was or might soon be She said “I must share this burden to set you free” So next to the river she planted flowers and trees Other poets coming abated my dis ease She told them “Drink from the river, as much as you please! If you don’t I will cause it to freeze.” Our Muse whispered loudly “Poets take your words near and far. Be true kind and vulnerable let people know who you are. Hide messages in bottles Transport people to a distant star Sing from the rooftops Tell Limericks in a bar Poetry is music play tunes on a guitar Shine bright like a fire fly that has escaped from its jar!” Together we have community Being with the rare few Who share our lunacy The ones able to decipher these things that we see For us it’s a river this place we love to be Gardens free of enemies Green grass, rivers and trees We gather by the shore like birds and bees You are welcome to join us stay for as long as you please!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/7/2020 11:56:00 AM
What a fantastic write about the Muse. I need to hangout in your river garden. Put me under the willow tree and I will be happy when a breeze sways the graceful branches. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 8/13/2019 5:08:00 AM
Awesome! Very intense and fluid. Powerfully packed!
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:26:00 PM
Hi Richard, I love this write, like so much of your work it sings to me. The words do flow so easily and they dance in the mind. This is one place i would like to stay a while to find peace. From this river i would surely wish to drink. Your pen does write gold once again. This gem does go into my faves. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 2/20/2018 8:25:00 PM
Rick...I'm at a loss for words with this write...I cannot, in a million intellectual words, do this beauty justice. I am in awe...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2018 8:52:00 AM
You are kind Rhoda. Thanks Rick.
Date: 2/20/2018 5:23:00 PM
Hi Richard, First of all let say congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved. This well written piece was so uplifting and inviting. You described such a warm and beautiful place. I would like to partake of this water. This poem reflects what the soup has been in the past and now. Excellent job. I really enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, this place has been a blessing and continues to be because of people like you.
Date: 2/17/2018 3:38:00 PM
Richard: I've got to get me some of this "pure" water. My last three works have been about "Road Kill Stew". Thanks for painting such a wonderful word picture of "The Soup Family" and sharing with all of us, deserving or not. :o) Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2018 11:33:00 AM
You ceartainly qualify Buck. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 2/14/2018 10:36:00 AM
A very inviting description of this place, we do truly drink and learn from each other, thanks for the reminder to be kind. Congrats on POTD well deserved Rick!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2018 11:34:00 AM
Thanks John.:0)
Date: 2/6/2018 4:24:00 PM
This is beautiful and inviting. I would like to drink from this river. Faving this one.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2018 7:12:00 AM
Thanks Becca, I think you have drank from it many times.
Date: 2/6/2018 10:38:00 AM
WOW!! Simply beautify, a new Fav for me. Thanks for sharing your creativity.. James
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2018 12:48:00 PM
Thanks James. A nice comment to start my day.
Date: 2/4/2018 9:25:00 AM
Aaahh, so wonderful!!! I could imagine this as a great lyric to sing along with guitar :D, thank you for your last visit Rick, wishing you a great daay, miss ya :D
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/4/2018 10:16:00 AM
Hi Yanny, so nice to have you back. You too are missed.
Date: 2/4/2018 8:10:00 AM
"The line between real and fantasy, you can make it thinner" love this <3
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/4/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Latrice, much appreciated.
Date: 2/4/2018 3:52:00 AM
Absolutely awesome. Wonderful and just what I needed to read today. 'Muted eyes became a vibrant pink'. A gift to write, feel and live those words. Many wishes, Kai
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/4/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Kai, your comment made my morning.
Date: 2/3/2018 9:41:00 PM
Wow Richard! Great ode to poets everywhere!...love how you say I have a community to share my lunacy :0... I need that! Have a great day :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/4/2018 12:20:00 AM
Thanks for the great comment Chris.
Date: 1/31/2018 2:33:00 PM
A blessing of Poem. Excellent in form, words and deeds. A spokesman for all Poets and Poems and Poetry indeed.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/1/2018 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Ronald.
Date: 1/30/2018 7:57:00 PM
This is a beautiful, moving tribute to the art of poetry. I wish more people could appreciate its value, Richard! Janice
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/31/2018 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Janice.:0)
Date: 1/30/2018 1:17:00 PM
POTD it is, rich... this fluid poem makes me fly as you raise the literary roof!... awesome-- huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/30/2018 7:13:00 PM
Hi Nette, thanks for adding your thoughts. Hugs Rick.
Date: 1/29/2018 3:10:00 AM
Congrats on being POTD, Richard. It does my heart good to see you so recognized for your work. hugs :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2018 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Eileen. Hugs Rick.
Date: 1/29/2018 12:28:00 AM
Honestly, Richard, the more I read your poetry the more I realize what a genius you are...and this poem proves it. It is perfect in every way and a delight to read aloud. I just love it...a big FAV for me...and I must print it to keep.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2018 8:35:00 AM
Wow, Carole, you are very kind. If I could favorite a comment this would certainly favorite this one.
Date: 1/28/2018 9:54:00 PM
A brilliant and inspiring poem Richard. Enticing, captivating and beautifully relatable in so many ways. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2018 8:37:00 AM
Thanks, Susan. I am pleased it was chosen. I am even more pleased by your thoughtful response.
Date: 1/28/2018 2:39:00 PM
What an awesome way to describe it.... your poetry has not limits.. Congrats on POTD..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 1/28/2018 1:44:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Richard - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2018 12:43:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, hugs back to you.
Date: 1/28/2018 12:51:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD with your well written poem Richard, a pleasure to read. :))
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2018 12:43:00 PM
Thanks Roy.
Date: 1/28/2018 12:02:00 PM
Connie is write you spoke to me and all the others, Richard.. Congratulations on POTD! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2018 12:49:00 PM
Thanks for the hug and visit Eve.
Date: 1/28/2018 11:13:00 AM
You spoke to all of us in your beautiful poem Richard. Congratulations on having this wonderful poem honored with POTD! I loved it! : )
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2018 12:49:00 PM
So pleased you enjoyed it Connie.
Date: 1/28/2018 11:04:00 AM
A perfect choice for POTD! This excellent poem should be the mantra for this site. Sit. Share. And be free by the river.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2018 4:28:00 PM
Thanks James.
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