She Touched the Water

She Touched The Water

My muse
touched the waters
of a spring fed river
She had a special gift to deliver
Releasing the inspiration 
from deep within her
She said “ Drink please witness 
about saint and sinner.
Surrender your mind 
become a true believer.
The line between real and fantasy,
you can make it thinner.”

So with my cupped hands
I began to deeply drink
Muted greys 
became a vibrant pink
Thoughts and ideas
were transformed into ink
It was all so fantastic
those things I could think
She said “Write them all down
or they’ll be gone in a blink.”
Not all thoughts were happy
some they made my heart sink.

The more I drank
the more I was elated
Oh how easily 
I concentrated
Ideas expressed
tales of wonder consecrated
Secretly I craved 
being congratulated
What was written felt solid
those things I created
Wise, wonderful words
emotionally weighted
Wanting more and more 
I couldn’t be sated

My magical muse
began to worry about me
Who I was
or might soon be
She said “I must share 
this burden to set you free”
So next to the river 
she planted flowers and trees
Other poets coming
abated my dis ease
She told them “Drink from the river,
as much as you please!
If you don’t I will cause it to freeze.”

Our Muse whispered loudly
“Poets take your words near and far.
Be true kind and vulnerable
let people know who you are.
Hide messages in bottles
Transport people to a distant star
Sing from the rooftops
Tell Limericks in a bar
Poetry is music
play tunes on a guitar
Shine bright like a fire fly
that has escaped from its jar!”

Together we have community
Being with the rare few
Who share our lunacy
The ones able to decipher
these things that we see
For us it’s a river
this place we love to be
Gardens free of enemies
Green grass, rivers and trees
We gather by the shore
like birds and bees
You are welcome to join us
stay for as long as you please!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Delaney Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 11:56 AM
What a fantastic write about the Muse. I need to hangout in your river garden. Put me under the willow tree and I will be happy when a breeze sways the graceful branches. Hugs, SuZ
Herrick Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 5:08 AM
Awesome! Very intense and fluid. Powerfully packed!
Raven Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Hi Richard, I love this write, like so much of your work it sings to me. The words do flow so easily and they dance in the mind. This is one place i would like to stay a while to find peace. From this river i would surely wish to drink. Your pen does write gold once again. This gem does go into my faves. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.
Tripp Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 8:25 PM
Rick...I'm at a loss for words with this write...I cannot, in a million intellectual words, do this beauty justice. I am in awe...
Lamoureux Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 8:52 AM
You are kind Rhoda. Thanks Rick.
Y. Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 5:23 PM
Hi Richard, First of all let say congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved. This well written piece was so uplifting and inviting. You described such a warm and beautiful place. I would like to partake of this water. This poem reflects what the soup has been in the past and now. Excellent job. I really enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
Lamoureux Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Alexis, this place has been a blessing and continues to be because of people like you.
Buck Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Richard: I've got to get me some of this "pure" water. My last three works have been about "Road Kill Stew". Thanks for painting such a wonderful word picture of "The Soup Family" and sharing with all of us, deserving or not. :o) Keep them coming. oldbuck
Lamoureux Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 11:33 AM
You ceartainly qualify Buck. Thanks for the visit.
Hamilton Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 10:36 AM
A very inviting description of this place, we do truly drink and learn from each other, thanks for the reminder to be kind. Congrats on POTD well deserved Rick!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 11:34 AM
Thanks John.:0)
Teagan Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 4:24 PM
This is beautiful and inviting. I would like to drink from this river. Faving this one.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 7:12 AM
Thanks Becca, I think you have drank from it many times.
Lee Sr. Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 10:38 AM
WOW!! Simply beautify, a new Fav for me. Thanks for sharing your creativity.. James
Lamoureux Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 12:48 PM
Thanks James. A nice comment to start my day.
Widjanarko Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Aaahh, so wonderful!!! I could imagine this as a great lyric to sing along with guitar :D, thank you for your last visit Rick, wishing you a great daay, miss ya :D
Lamoureux Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 10:16 AM
Hi Yanny, so nice to have you back. You too are missed.
S. Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 8:10 AM
"The line between real and fantasy, you can make it thinner" love this <3
Lamoureux Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Thanks Latrice, much appreciated.
Neumann Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 3:52 AM
Absolutely awesome. Wonderful and just what I needed to read today. 'Muted eyes became a vibrant pink'. A gift to write, feel and live those words. Many wishes, Kai
Lamoureux Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Thanks Kai, your comment made my morning.
Hagy Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 9:41 PM
Wow Richard! Great ode to poets everywhere!...love how you say I have a community to share my lunacy :0... I need that! Have a great day :)
Lamoureux Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 12:20 AM
Thanks for the great comment Chris.
Williams Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 2:33 PM
A blessing of Poem. Excellent in form, words and deeds. A spokesman for all Poets and Poems and Poetry indeed.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 10:08 AM
Thanks Ronald.
Canerdy Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 7:57 PM
This is a beautiful, moving tribute to the art of poetry. I wish more people could appreciate its value, Richard! Janice
Lamoureux Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 8:01 AM
Thanks Janice.:0)
Onclaud Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 1:17 PM
POTD it is, rich... this fluid poem makes me fly as you raise the literary roof!... awesome-- huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Hi Nette, thanks for adding your thoughts. Hugs Rick.
Manassian Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 3:10 AM
Congrats on being POTD, Richard. It does my heart good to see you so recognized for your work. hugs :)
Lamoureux Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Thanks Eileen. Hugs Rick.
Duet Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 12:28 AM
Honestly, Richard, the more I read your poetry the more I realize what a genius you are...and this poem proves it. It is perfect in every way and a delight to read aloud. I just love it...a big FAV for me...and I must print it to keep.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Wow, Carole, you are very kind. If I could favorite a comment this would certainly favorite this one.
Ashley Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 9:54 PM
A brilliant and inspiring poem Richard. Enticing, captivating and beautifully relatable in so many ways. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Lamoureux Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Thanks, Susan. I am pleased it was chosen. I am even more pleased by your thoughtful response.
One Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 2:39 PM
What an awesome way to describe it.... your poetry has not limits.. Congrats on POTD..
Lamoureux Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Thanks my friend.
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 1:44 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Richard - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, hugs back to you.
Pett Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Congratulations on POTD with your well written poem Richard, a pleasure to read. :))
Lamoureux Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Thanks Roy.
Roper Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Connie is write you spoke to me and all the others, Richard.. Congratulations on POTD! Hugs Eve ~`*
Lamoureux Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 12:49 PM
Thanks for the hug and visit Eve.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 11:13 AM
You spoke to all of us in your beautiful poem Richard. Congratulations on having this wonderful poem honored with POTD! I loved it! : )
Lamoureux Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 12:49 PM
So pleased you enjoyed it Connie.
Swartz Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 11:04 AM
A perfect choice for POTD! This excellent poem should be the mantra for this site. Sit. Share. And be free by the river.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Thanks James.
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