She Touched My Heart

A sweet little girl, possibly four, maybe five years old
Wearing a faded blue dress torn along the seam,
Living on the street with her drug-addicted parents
No chance at really experiencing the American dream.

It was clear she had never known a normal child’s life
She seemed perfectly content playing on the street,
While uncaring people constantly ignored her folks
Pretending not to see the little girl with her dirty feet.

She touched my heart although I could do little to help
I came back later with sandwiches and a teddy bear
They seemed so grateful…yet, I had done so little,
I brought a bright blue ribbon for the little girl’s hair.

She stood staring at me as I walked slowly away
She was still holding the blue ribbon in her dirty hands,
She could not see the tears rolling down my cheeks
But, I pray the time will come when she understands.

NINTH PLACED WINNER
written September 4, 2021
for "The One Who Touched My Heart" poetry contest
sponsored by Regina McIntosh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Edmonds  Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 11:43 AM
That little girl would have touched my heart too Milton, a heartfelt write. Congratulations on your win in Regina’s contest… Belle
Hankins Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Thank you, Belle. I really appreciate your response to my poem.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. So sad it was true. She probably never forgot you. You were her angel. Have a great/blessed day..............
Hankins Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Thank you so much, Paula. I see I squeaked through! LOL.
Won Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 5:53 AM
So sweet and heartfelt, congrats on the placement :)
Hankins Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 10:07 AM
Thanks so much for your sweet comment, Avery. I hope all is going better for you.
Alex Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 5:08 AM
Beautiful quatrain on a little girl who touched your heart. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 10:07 AM
Thank you, Christuraj.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 4:44 AM
Beautiful. CONGRATS on this amazing write. Love it. God bless you my friend, Love, Gina
Hankins Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 10:08 AM
Thanks, Gina. I enjoyed writing for your contest, and I thank you for my placement.
Skelly Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 8:58 PM
heartfelt entry for the contest...Delice
Hankins Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 9:31 PM
Oh, well, contest or no contest, I have often wondered what became of that sweet little child. She would be in her thirties by now!
Cunningham Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 3:58 PM
I feel for kids who have parents like that, I can understand why she touched your heart Milton. I hope things turned out well for her. Tom
Hankins Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 5:09 PM
Me, too, but I realize they have such a poor chance to rise out of that kind of a situation. Somewhere along the line someone has to give her lots more help than I could on the spur of the moment.
Carmack Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 3:10 PM
This does not feel fictional and I am glad you helped them. The human condition is tragic due to our incredible propensity for corruption on all levels. Good luck in the contest.
Hankins Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 3:14 PM
Rob, I hesitated to enter this poem because the family was not a relative, friend, or co-worker, as Regina suggested, but she certainly touched my heart, and I will never forget her. I often wonder what became of her. Thanks for your thoughts, Rob. I appreciate them.
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