Joanna Daniel Poet Monorhyme

She Smiled a Smile

She smiled a smile that reached not her eyes,
Who can know what beneath her smile lies?

She smiled a smile her hurt to disguise,
Who can understand her life's dark skies?

She smiled a smile to hide her heart's cries, 
Who will care to listen to her sighs?

She smiled a smile despite hope's demise,
Who can see her soul's tears crystallise?

She smiled a smile as a compromise,
Who can feel how she does agonise?

She still smiles a smile to tranquillise,
Who can read her soulful smile's surprise?


11/20/17

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Sandra Haight January 5, 2018 at 4:26 PM Such a lovely poem, Jo! Congratulations on your podium win in the contest! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier January 5, 2018 at 2:45 PM Congrats on your well deserved win, Jo.

Beautiful Scars January 5, 2018 at 1:28 PM oh I love this! congrats ;) -luloo

Gregory Richard Barden January 5, 2018 at 12:19 AM Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Jo - blessings and best wishes for a Happy New Year, friend! :-)

Susan Ashley January 3, 2018 at 9:14 PM Beautifully and poetically expressed sad thoughts, Jo, of a truth that is so recognizable. Congratulations for your wonderful win... ~Susan

John Hamilton January 3, 2018 at 11:03 AM This is great poetry Jo, loved it, congrats on a fine win!

CayCay Godwin December 30, 2017 at 7:59 AM I have worn this smile that you spoke of so poetically and truthfully. This is not lighthearted, but a truth that applies to all of us at some point or another. A great job, Jo, really touched me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Joseph May December 24, 2017 at 7:00 AM Very well expressed Jo...enjoyed

FJ Thomas December 20, 2017 at 1:13 PM How very sad and beautiful Jo. And true for so many today.

CayCay Godwin November 25, 2017 at 3:24 PM Ew la la in feeling and delivery, thought provoking for me as well. I'm finding one gem after another while visiting your pages. What a good time I'm having with your poems, Jo. Talent is talent is talent. Hugs ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux November 23, 2017 at 7:39 AM I imagine you to be that who. This is a thought provoking piece.

Connie Marcum Wong November 21, 2017 at 10:19 PM This is beautiful Jo! I love the feelings this poem shares. Going straight into my Faves my friend! : )

Deborah Burch November 21, 2017 at 12:46 PM Nailed it!! Well done Jo!! Hold that door!! ;) big Hugggs!! Cap'n

Silent One November 21, 2017 at 8:03 AM So many are full of pain but wear a smile, so the world does not see their sorrow.. deep write

Arthur Vaso November 20, 2017 at 11:28 PM Such a beautiful poem, so sad, and I know well how a smile can hide the sadness inside, and an amazing poem!

Arturo Michael November 20, 2017 at 6:11 PM To start with a beautiful girl grace this poem...and, you described her with justice... Lovely poem Jo....All the best to you

Jan Allison November 20, 2017 at 4:12 PM A smile can be painted on but the eyes never lie Jo:-) very well written:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. November 20, 2017 at 2:11 PM Hi Jo, This is a well written introspective piece. I "was" this girl at one point in my life. You conveyed the message of a girl whose smile didn't reach her eyes very well. I really like the "monorhyme" form. Excellent job:-) Alexis

Constance La France November 20, 2017 at 1:40 PM Jo, great introspection, well done, sometimes the brokenhearted smile but they can never hide the the pain that lies within their eyes, that window to the soul.

Patricia Cresswell November 20, 2017 at 11:26 AM Extremely well penned. It covers all the different smiles a human face can manufacture.

Lin Lane November 20, 2017 at 8:38 AM Beware of the one whose smile doesn't extend to their eyes. Your monorhymes are many and well chosen. Nice write, Jo.