Deb M Poet Rhyme

-She Sits On The Outer Looking In

She sits on the outer looking in
As the party is in full swing
Another family gathering
With all the happiness and laughter it brings

Her family….children and grandchildren
Her reason since their birth
Nurturing, worrying and loving them
Her purpose on this earth

She reflects back on their younger years
The days of prams, parks and play
Of afternoon naps and cuddles
Forever sharing their days

Always being needed
The apple of their eyes
Knowing their lives entirely
There to comfort their cries
 
Adults and teenagers now
The years have brought changes
No longer knowing them as she did
Absent are the daily exchanges

Without question their love for her has not altered 
Yet the circle of life forever turns
She sits on the outer looking in
A stifled tear falls as her heart yearns

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Linda Alice Fowler May 3, 2024 at 4:12 PM Lovely melancholia exhibited with your nostalgic write Deb! hugs LO :) Deb M May 3, 2024 at 4:15 PM Awww so lovely to see you cute LO ha! Thankyou for your nice words! Debx

Joseph May April 22, 2024 at 4:27 PM Sweet reflections turn to melancholy yearning, Very nicely penned Deb Deb M April 23, 2024 at 5:44 AM Thanks so much Joseph! Debx

Darrell Rose April 7, 2024 at 2:52 AM Ouch.... Deb M April 22, 2024 at 12:41 AM Ouch indeed Darrell !! Debx

Mike Gentile April 3, 2024 at 10:45 AM Deb, so bittersweet and beautiful are your lines! So very true and so often, a part of life that mot experience. You have crafted a poignant and lovely poetic portrait! Happy Wednesday xxoo Deb M April 22, 2024 at 4:41 AM Thankyou dear Mike….yes its obvious its something a lot of people experience in life…. good to share! I always value your thoughts my friend! Debx

Gregory Stanford March 26, 2024 at 6:40 AM Its very rarely mentioned, how vulnerable souls feel lonely at the noisy parties, or anywhere in the crowd. Very deep and sublime poem, Deb! Thank you Deb M April 22, 2024 at 4:43 AM Hi Gregory….thankyou for your kind words. It seems to be something so many can relate too. Ageing comes with its pro’s and cons thats for sure! Deb x

Panagiota Romios March 23, 2024 at 10:15 PM This is says so much about our society. And my blunt terms plainly and openly is. It Sucks. In our family ,you take care of the elderly till they die you don’t move across country and leave your parents somewhere to die. I think that sucks ..we’re too busy, writing poetry and making comments .They are too old and too hard to take care of! When my family moves to Tennessee. I will be going with them and living with them until I die..all us will be family grandchildren dogs,cars, pangie xoxo Deb M April 22, 2024 at 4:35 AM Hi Pangie….Thank-you for your very passionate reply. Unfortunately, there are times as we age we feel on the outer looking in. A lot of lonely overlooked older people out there! Thankyou dear Pangie! Debx

Ink Empress March 23, 2024 at 1:20 PM Gosh i can imagine me being in that state of mind in many years as today too, i reminisce and think of all the changes and how time just flies, makes my heart heavy, with memories so deep, i felt the depth of this poem and youv delivered it in a very soulful manner as always, on that would resonate with many, for so many can feel what youv conveyed, i love it! Its a fave for me . Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always Deb M April 22, 2024 at 4:31 AM A fave from you sweet Ink is very impressive and special so l thankyou kindly sweet girl! Debx

Bill Baker March 22, 2024 at 6:12 PM A very hard poem to read, knowing the truth within its lines, Deb. My biggest challenge is dealing with loneliness and isolation as I age. I was always so active and involved in everything, now it's all online or nothing. It's sad and heartbreaking at times. Makes a person wonder what the purpose of living on is. Blessings to you, my dear precious friend. Big hugs, Bill Deb M April 22, 2024 at 4:29 AM I know Bill ageing isn't always kind and comes with its issues, loneliness, fear and disappointments etc but it is also beautiful with its wisdom, clarity and appreciation. Thankyou my dearest lovely Bill Baker….Debx

Joseph P. DiMino March 21, 2024 at 10:56 AM It seems, somehow, we can make do with reductions in most everything -- juggle the budget, rearrange time...but love distanced, separated, is devastating to heart and soul. Very well phrased poem. Add my tear to the pot. Blessings my friend. Deb M April 22, 2024 at 4:26 AM Hi Joe….thankyou for your kind words….l love that “Add my tear to the pot” so sweet….Debx

Gershon Wolf March 20, 2024 at 9:20 PM Kids grow, we groan... adjustments are made, as difficult as they may be... As the world turns and turns and returns. ~ gw Deb M April 22, 2024 at 4:17 AM The cycle of life sucks at times BB….Haha!! Debx

Victor Buhagiar March 20, 2024 at 9:34 AM I read about how large America is and how often our children depart to a far-off land. Yet we still need their cuddles. Lovely poem. I am getting too few reads and have almost given poetry up. Forgotten me? Deb M April 22, 2024 at 4:25 AM Victor l never forget you but life outside Soup goes on and gets very busy at times! Always a cuddle for you….Debx

Beryl Edmonds March 20, 2024 at 3:17 AM A wonderful write Deb, sadly it is how it is, life moves on though pain it inflicts. Nothing can steal the love one has for their mother or grandmother, it’s there in heart for ever and ever… Beryl Deb M April 22, 2024 at 4:24 AM So Very true Belle….but as we age there are times we are not always seen….cycle of life l know! Ha….thankyou sweet Belle! Debx

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 19, 2024 at 8:15 PM Dear Deb, you have captured the bittersweet emotions of a mother watching her family grow and change. I love the imagery of love, nurturing, and longing is deeply moving, resonating with anyone who has experienced the passage of time within a family. Your wonderful artistic words beautifully convey the eternal bond between a mother and her children, while also acknowledging the inevitable shifts and transitions that come with life's journey. Deb, what a heartfelt reflection on the complexities of love and the enduring presence of family ties. A FAV - Blessings, Daniel Deb M April 22, 2024 at 4:22 AM Another Fav and from you Daniel….very special indeed my friend! Thankyou….De bx

Michael Tor March 19, 2024 at 8:00 PM Deb this is no doubt a Favorite and such a true heartfelt piece for many. It had me in tears for all the thoughts I could relate in your words. Definitely POTD quality. So in depth into what many experience when the children grow up and leave the nest or even friends for that matter. I am so glad I stopped by to read this Heart touching piece by you. Your love and kindness you have inside you can only bring out such great work such as this. God bless you and a big hug... Deb M April 22, 2024 at 4:21 AM A favourite oh thats lovely Michael….favs are such so special to me! Im so glad you liked it….it means a lot my friend! Debx

Peter Dome March 19, 2024 at 5:10 PM Wow Deb this is deep and so emotional. I have always felt I was on the outside looking in. Sadly your words are true for so many. Thank you, heartfelt best wishes, Pete. A favourite was added to my list. Deb M April 22, 2024 at 4:16 AM Hi Pete, A fav is very special so l truly appreciate that….you're right is seems to be true for many sadly! Thanks….Debx

Hilda Greenhough March 19, 2024 at 5:00 PM Kids. Put that lady on a fabulous cruise. I enjoy this poem. And await my cruise. Deb M April 22, 2024 at 4:13 AM Thanks Hilda! Debx

Malabika Ray Choudhury March 19, 2024 at 4:23 PM Really beautiful, touching poem, Dear Deb. Enjoyed the poignant emotions and thoughts expressed in rhymes. Best wishes ~