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She Sits Alone - POTD

The visitors arrive and I must bear
Their comments are not that I really care.

I stare at them as they would stare at me; 
Until they break the ice, act so beastly.

Listen to their litany of abuse,
"Look well, her eyes are closed, having a snooze?"

"Isn't this an invert of a known painting?"
"Nice auburn hair though she looks like fainting."

"Not as good as Mona, now that's a dear."
I cannot understand why they come here.

They dare compare me to that wanton lass
How many men know she was sick, alas?

Finally, they leave except for one man.
I know that I can return his love for me.

If it were in my power down I'd come
Leave this mural, on his lips and kiss him some.

The painter draws our love and endeavour,
Happy; we'll be each other forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Williams Avatar
August 12, 2024 at 10:02 PM
Dear Victor I'm late to the party with this, I have been quite busy lately, however I can see why this beautiful poem got awarded PTD, it deserves the accolades. Congratulations. Hugs
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 5:57 PM
Contemporaneous breath strokes as a quill doubles for its POTD mentor, prosit Victor. Aloha William
Bayles Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 7:45 AM
Wonderful, Victory. Congratulations on POTD.
Nicole Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 6:30 PM
' The painter draws our love. ' I can feel the longing within, as I look at this picture. She's lingering in deep thought, simply waiting to be held. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Roper Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 5:49 PM
Great write, my friend. Congratulations on POTD.
Kitchin Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 4:01 PM
Victor, wonderful, congratulations on POTD. -hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a lovely write. Painters paint with paint. Writes paint with words. You have painted a wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away............
Rodgers Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 8:07 AM
Hello Victor, First of all congratulations on POTD!!! I love your voice in the painting, which brings feelings once idle to life. Plus the contrast between superficial judgments and the deeper, often unspoken, desires for love and connection. A wonderful read!! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Anaya Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 7:47 AM
A visual search of the lovely painting "Lonely Girl" by Jacky Gerritsen. It helps to see whose perspective it is. "Their litany of abuse" how original. I found humor then love Victor. I really enjoyed your humor in this one. Congratulations on your POTD! ~xo
Empress Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 6:59 AM
Congratulations on POTD dear victor. Well deserved
May Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 6:40 AM
Congrats on POTD Victor, Very nicely done
George Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 5:50 AM
This poem I missed ! This is a wonderful personification of a painting ! Great imagination. Your topics are so diverse. The relation between the painter and the painting is so deep as between two lovers. Great poem. Congratulations dear Victor on your well deserved POTD.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 5:32 AM
If I was a painting I’d peel myself off the canvas to kiss the lips of such a talented poet. Beautifully penned. Congratulations on POTD dear vb! xomo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 8:13 AM
~x
Buhagiar Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 5:53 AM
You can kiss me anytime you like, sweetheart.
Lawless Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 5:22 AM
brilliant bit of personification Victor...art critics from the "painting's" perspective. Nicely done and very unique...
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 4:25 AM
Dropping back with many congrats on POTD Victor xx
Gentile Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 3:56 AM
Victor, your Personification makes for such interesting reading and is so well done, no wonder it is POTD! Enjoy your day!!
Kaufman Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 3:17 AM
Dear Victor, I enjoyed your interesting perspective, of the thoughts of the classic Mona Lisa. A hearty congratulations on this creative piece. Have a blessed day..
Kaufman Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 3:18 AM
oops..obviously not Mona. Please educate me on the famous painting..thanks
Greenhough Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 2:41 AM
Your poem has received the honor. Congratulations on POTD.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 2:38 AM
An excellent poem as told from the woman in the painting. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day Victor… Beryl
Seeker Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 2:23 AM
Unique and so imaginative, exquisitely penned, Victor. You’ve lined up quite a few POTD honours now, fantastic!
Elliott Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 1:49 AM
What a very imaginative and inspiring poem, Victor. A big Congratulations on a much deserved POTD. Enjoy your special poetry day. All the best to you. ~
Jones Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 12:41 AM
I suppose men can fall in love with an image as they are so visual. Great personification Victor! And congratulations on your potd honor!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 12:39 AM
Beautifully done. Very original my friend. I really enjoyed it. Many Congratulations on today's POTD. Have a great awarded day!.
Cunningham Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 12:31 AM
Back with congratulations to you Victor on the honour of POTD. Tom
Greenhough Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 8:11 PM
I wonder if someone ever did fall in love with a person in a paintig? I enjoy the craziness of this poem.
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