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She is Your Shadow




                      My reflection being light and carefree, 
                 bright like the sun- possibly 
          as this is a part of me 

                                      however- you don’t see


                       To know you then, 
                  be a part of your ever after 

                  pressing your name to mine
                        in poetic rhyme,
                tracing “The Sound of Music”
                         upon your skin,
                       lost in the melody


                             My heart could love- you 
                                                                now 


                           Perhaps, if things were different 
                                  you- could love me, 
                                       in our reality . . 
 
                    
                                Clouds would subside
                                  allowing me inside


 
                        Yet, in this reality:


                                         Your eyes shine 
                                    guiding the way,
                             she follows closely


                                 She is Your Shadow 
                                       - and I am not her



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~ Just a little scribble ~
Thoughts from the heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/10/2019 1:33:00 PM
Hello Brandy Nicole, I like thes scribbles from the heart. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2019 5:28:00 PM
HelloIt is good to write from the heart. My best to you . have a nice evening my friend. Brandy,
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/10/2019 3:00:00 PM
Dear Darlene, your kind words are appreciated. I shall always write from the heart. Thank you for your wonderful comment. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/3/2019 1:11:00 PM
such a sad ending... your scribbles are so amazing..
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/3/2019 6:16:00 PM
Yes, there is a touch of sadness here at the end. Thank you Silent One. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/2/2019 7:53:00 AM
Yes, you understand the thing...but here on earth it could be just the warmth of your skin or the kiss of your lips... that makes a moment worthwhile....
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/2/2019 2:14:00 PM
True. Sometimes, a touch can express so much. A moment held between two hearts. Your thoughts are always appreciated. Thank you Arturo. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/1/2019 7:06:00 AM
Gasp! It's not you? My heart weeps but beautifully expressed.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/1/2019 4:19:00 PM
In this poem, it isn't me. No need to weep though. Thank you Gerald for your kind words. ~ Brandy
Date: 2/1/2019 1:31:00 AM
A free write...inner feelings, stream of conscious...Yes, Brandy, its fun to write pieces like this...enjoyed!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/1/2019 4:18:00 PM
Thank you James. Of course embracing this reality and these inner feelings is never fun. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 1/31/2019 10:07:00 AM
This reminds me of a couple lines from the Olivia Newton-John song "I Honestly Love You"..."if we both were born in another place in time, this moment might be ending with a kiss." There are so many "what if's" in life and you don't realize in until after the fact when you think back. This beautiful scribble touches me my friend. John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/31/2019 7:16:00 PM
Thank you John. I appreciate your detailed thoughts on this little scribble of mine. Yes, there are and always will be- many moments in life when the heart questions what could have been, or what if? I am sure many can relate to this. My best to you my dear friend. ~ Brandy
Date: 1/31/2019 9:07:00 AM
The sound of your music is wistful and forlorn. A very emotive expression of longing, very nicely written.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/31/2019 7:12:00 PM
The melody does hold a tender touch of melancholy. When a heart is heavy, a deep longing lingers indeed. Thank you Lawrence. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 1/31/2019 7:32:00 AM
You capture the reader within your sound of music and words of romantic tease..whispers of love. Didn't expect that ending..quite well done, Brandy.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/31/2019 6:59:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. To feel such love, romance- to trace the melody of one heart. Yet, never to know this music. The end, completes the ache inside. Your thoughts always move me. ~ Brandy
Date: 1/31/2019 6:10:00 AM
The ending two lines say it all, and in a poetically wonderful way!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/31/2019 6:16:00 PM
Thank you Caren. The last thought truly is the heart of the poem, bringing it all to realization. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 1/31/2019 12:44:00 AM
You scribble with gusto. So lovely verse. And a hint of romance too.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/31/2019 6:08:00 PM
Thank you Victor. Your thoughts are appreciated. Where there is love, there is romance. Sometimes, a touch of longing, sadness- that sweet ache. Once again, thank you for your kind words. ~ Brandy