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She Is Killing Me

The stream from my tender eyes Flow so freely, she seems to despise I close up now, I’m hurting too much Pain in my heart, dying as such I see now all the deception She’s going to destroy me, annihilation I hate that I must go through this As once life was perfectly bliss I’m dead now, not a breath left She has killed me, gave me a heft I feel nothing now, I’m so numb Can’t believe it really, I was so dumb Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/13/2011 10:49:00 AM
Sad work..The pain of lost love is a very deep pain..Good work about the topic..Thanks for each review of my work..Sara
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Date: 8/13/2011 12:48:00 AM
been there dumped upon the street, ducking sidestepping her big ol feet, got me mouth shut, aint she sweet. Goanna need a orthodondist, hey. it flows well Russell, keep em coming babe, cobber, Don
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Date: 8/12/2011 11:51:00 PM
experience... yum!
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