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She Is April Premiere Contest Winner

In the center of a fresh pageant, she throttles like a mythical woman quick to dance among open flowers, whirling like a hundred stars with curves round and breasts oyster pink as the trees, ovules, candles in her eyes open the fingertips of near April. Wild tempo vibrates on wispy notes, until eyes of fire melt nightfall's brew... for primal and young is this Aries goddess holding a voile skirt that lifts into a twirl while the moon hangs like a violin... eager to wing this lady's reggae jigs drifting on brocade of her springtime arms: And if every detail of lace in a gown can be sewn in the light touching her flesh , this she shall bring too... this near April debut. Contest: Your best poem in the last year Sponsor: Silent One Written 3/6/2017 Re-submitted 2/5/2018

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Date: 2/8/2018 11:20:00 PM
Back again with congratulations on your win, Nette! Great choice for the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/5/2018 8:52:00 PM
Congrats on bringing April to life quite magnificently, nette.
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Date: 2/5/2018 7:35:00 PM
Nette, your imagery and personification of the month of April is vibrant and breathtaking. Congratulations on your excellent win. ~Susan
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Date: 2/5/2018 3:56:00 PM
Your use of words and how you pair them and create such wonderful lines is once again evident in this poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
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Date: 9/20/2017 12:57:00 PM
Bravo Nette, Im reading your others now and its so beautifully light and upbeat. Different too.
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Date: 5/17/2017 8:15:00 PM
I love love this :)
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Date: 3/15/2017 10:48:00 AM
Line upon line drips it's golden ink throughout this March masterpiece! My best to you, chuck
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Date: 3/15/2017 12:48:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win, Nette! Every line is incredible. I can't wait for April...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/15/2017 12:31:00 AM
"And if every detail of lace in a gown can be sewn in the light touching her flesh, this she shall bring too..." So delicious, Nette. : )
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Date: 3/14/2017 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win Nette. Your awesome entry deserves the accolades! This is poetry at its best! 7 ; ) and a Fave!
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Date: 3/14/2017 9:25:00 AM
Hey Nette, what did I tell you! Looked like the winner first read, second read even better! Congrats on a wonderful write and win!
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Date: 3/14/2017 8:56:00 AM
Hey, Nette, just read this as a Nor'Easter is about to hit Boston....congrats on your top placement...and bring on April....soon.
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Date: 3/13/2017 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations...
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Date: 3/13/2017 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win Nette...
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Date: 3/12/2017 6:16:00 PM
Congratulation nette, I thought this poem was beautiful the first time I read it, the only thing that has changed is we are closer to April and you won dear poet
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Date: 3/12/2017 5:20:00 PM
many congrats Nette fabulous personification and imagery - no wonder it hit the top spot:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/12/2017 5:03:00 PM
Awesome! Great imagery. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 3/12/2017 5:02:00 PM
This is quite beautiful with pirouetting skirt and the moon hanging like a violin! Congrats on your top win, Nette!
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Date: 3/12/2017 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/12/2017 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations sweet friend!! Well done nette!! Big Hugggs deb
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Date: 3/12/2017 3:22:00 PM
nette, this is beautiful personification of the month of april, some glorious imagery and excellent use of language - congrats on your 1st place win in my contest!
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Date: 3/7/2017 2:00:00 PM
- April is a beautiful month ... your words describe its beauty, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 1:40:00 PM
Your poetry has brought April to life before its time dear, nette! Marvelous , a seven and hugs!
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Date: 3/7/2017 9:03:00 AM
I agree totally with James! Absolutely stunning write, Nette:) a 7:)
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Date: 3/6/2017 10:30:00 PM
Oh my goodness, Nette! your original talent is mesmerizing!
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