She Is An Exquisite Dinner

she is an exquisite dinner
awakens taste with beguiling smiles
a platter of kindness
wrapped in delicate crepes
lips that promise
a selection of wines
set for any course you so desire
a delicate glass never empty
a macedoine salad
stolen from the garden 
of some goddess
a bewitching soup 
dipped from a cauldron
enchantment in every spoon
that reaches the palate
fruits that have come from far
and forbidden shores
an intoxicating sweetness that consumes
all of the senses
and finally the piece de resistance
what drove Greek sculptors to stone
she is sitting across the table

   OKC   06/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Fenn Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 12:02 AM
Wow! So original!
Ray Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 3:35 AM
thank you Jennifer....
Jones Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 2:46 AM
Back with congrats on your potw!
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 10:54 AM
thank you
Meadows Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 11:58 PM
Well done. Congratulations on your POTW.
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 10:55 AM
thank you, appreciated
Radice Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 9:30 AM
You have a great taste in words Timothy. My sincere compliments to the chef. :) Cheers - Gary
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 10:57 AM
thank you Gary
Goldsmith Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. A wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 10:59 AM
thank you Paula....
Jones Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 3:49 AM
"lips that promise a selection of wines" My favorite line so sensual. Love this poem!
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:03 AM
thank you Karen
Babcock Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 11:50 AM
Wow a wonderful romantic poem that was a delight to read. Well written well done. love phyl
Calasibetta Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 7:43 AM
Congratulations on your POTW! A delightful metaphor for love! :)Paulette
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:07 AM
thank you, kind words appreciated
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 6:48 AM
Revisiting to congratulate you on your POTW! Wonderful! Best ~ Mala
Seeker Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 11:53 PM
Charming! Beautifully penned, Timothy! Congrats on POTW
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:08 AM
thank you....
Nicole Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 7:17 PM
With her being "a delicate glass never empty, sitting across the table". She is definitely a keeper. This is so beautiful and romantic, delightful in every way. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. Congratulations Timothy, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Brandy
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:07 AM
thanks Brandy, very happy you appreciated
Edmonds  Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 6:13 PM
Beautiful and romantic poetry Timothy. Congratulations on poem of the week… Belle
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 1:45 PM
Outstanding Timothy. Congratulations on your wonderful POTW honor. Blessings xxoo
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:11 AM
thank you Connie
Lawrence Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 11:06 AM
Yay Timothy ! Back with big congratulations on POTW !! Your heart shines in this . Love it ! Hugs, Susan :)
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:10 AM
thank you Susan....
Baker Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 7:35 AM
WOW! very engaging poetry, Timothy. Congratulations on POTW. Enjoy your special honor this week! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:14 AM
thanks Bill....quite the place we have here....
La France Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 6:27 AM
Timothy, beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor, blessings ~Constance
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:16 AM
thank you Constance
Cunningham Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 1:19 AM
A very romantic verse Timothy, great use of metaphors and a well deserved honour of POTW. Congratulations. Tom
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:10 AM
thanks Tom....
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 4:03 PM
WOW! Love the intoxicating charm of your poetry! You are a romantic at heart!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 5:57 PM
You are right - my first name is Malabika, which is a Sanskrit word, meaning “Princess Of Malava” - mentioned in Sanskrit classic by Kalidasa. Thank you for looking it up.
Ray Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 4:13 PM
wasn't always but have moved into that arena for some time now...and i am a happier man...there are some great ones here, thank you much appreciated...fascinating last name, Sanskrit, looked it up
Newbey Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 4:41 PM
interesting but the depth seems to , elude , me
Ray Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 3:05 PM
how about an allude....make the ordinary magical....
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 5:57 AM
Beautiful poetry, Tim!
Ray Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 2:57 PM
thank you Kim....
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 5:20 PM
ooh la la la. A FAVE
Ray Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 3:00 PM
pssst....the next one....she is cooking....you remind me of my daughters....so you are already a Fave
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June 8, 2022 at 1:06 PM
This is romanism at it's best and goes straight into my favs. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Cheers my friend :-)
Ray Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 2:58 PM
thank you Anne......
Pandit Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 6:44 AM
An intoxicating sweetness that consumes all of the senses--so very exquisite, Timothy. Enchantment in every word--delightfully delivered.
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:19 AM
thank you Vijay
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 3:04 AM
Ahh!! Romantically describing your date for dinner is very enchanting. It reminds me of The Book Of Song Of Solomon description of his/His bride. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:20 AM
thank you Sara
George Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 8:59 PM
What a treat for the palate ! You have somebody in your mind who surpasses the taste and flavor of all delicious cuisines and you have paid a lovely tribute to her. Your descriptions are 'mouth drooling' Timothy! Enjoyed so much....
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:21 AM
thank you Valsa...
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