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She Is An Exquisite Dinner

she is an exquisite dinner awakens taste with beguiling smiles a platter of kindness wrapped in delicate crepes lips that promise a selection of wines set for any course you so desire a delicate glass never empty a macedoine salad stolen from the garden of some goddess a bewitching soup dipped from a cauldron enchantment in every spoon that reaches the palate fruits that have come from far and forbidden shores an intoxicating sweetness that consumes all of the senses and finally the piece de resistance what drove Greek sculptors to stone she is sitting across the table OKC 06/22

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Date: 6/18/2022 12:02:00 AM
Wow! So original!
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/18/2022 3:35:00 AM
thank you Jennifer....
Date: 6/17/2022 2:46:00 AM
Back with congrats on your potw!
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 10:54:00 AM
thank you
Date: 6/14/2022 11:58:00 PM
Well done. Congratulations on your POTW.
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 10:55:00 AM
thank you, appreciated
Date: 6/14/2022 9:30:00 AM
You have a great taste in words Timothy. My sincere compliments to the chef. :) Cheers - Gary
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 10:57:00 AM
thank you Gary
Date: 6/14/2022 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. A wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 10:59:00 AM
thank you Paula....
Date: 6/14/2022 3:49:00 AM
"lips that promise a selection of wines" My favorite line so sensual. Love this poem!
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 11:03:00 AM
thank you Karen
Date: 6/13/2022 11:50:00 AM
Wow a wonderful romantic poem that was a delight to read. Well written well done. love phyl
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Date: 6/13/2022 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW! A delightful metaphor for love! :)Paulette
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 11:07:00 AM
thank you, kind words appreciated
Date: 6/13/2022 6:48:00 AM
Revisiting to congratulate you on your POTW! Wonderful! Best ~ Mala
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Date: 6/12/2022 11:53:00 PM
Charming! Beautifully penned, Timothy! Congrats on POTW
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 11:08:00 AM
thank you....
Date: 6/12/2022 7:17:00 PM
With her being "a delicate glass never empty, sitting across the table". She is definitely a keeper. This is so beautiful and romantic, delightful in every way. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. Congratulations Timothy, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 11:07:00 AM
thanks Brandy, very happy you appreciated
Date: 6/12/2022 6:13:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic poetry Timothy. Congratulations on poem of the week… Belle
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Date: 6/12/2022 1:45:00 PM
Outstanding Timothy. Congratulations on your wonderful POTW honor. Blessings xxoo
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 11:11:00 AM
thank you Connie
Date: 6/12/2022 11:06:00 AM
Yay Timothy ! Back with big congratulations on POTW !! Your heart shines in this . Love it ! Hugs, Susan :)
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 11:10:00 AM
thank you Susan....
Date: 6/12/2022 7:35:00 AM
WOW! very engaging poetry, Timothy. Congratulations on POTW. Enjoy your special honor this week! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 11:14:00 AM
thanks Bill....quite the place we have here....
Date: 6/12/2022 6:27:00 AM
Timothy, beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor, blessings ~Constance
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 11:16:00 AM
thank you Constance
Date: 6/12/2022 1:19:00 AM
A very romantic verse Timothy, great use of metaphors and a well deserved honour of POTW. Congratulations. Tom
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 11:10:00 AM
thanks Tom....
Date: 6/10/2022 4:03:00 PM
WOW! Love the intoxicating charm of your poetry! You are a romantic at heart!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/10/2022 5:57:00 PM
You are right - my first name is Malabika, which is a Sanskrit word, meaning “Princess Of Malava” - mentioned in Sanskrit classic by Kalidasa. Thank you for looking it up.
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/10/2022 4:13:00 PM
wasn't always but have moved into that arena for some time now...and i am a happier man...there are some great ones here, thank you much appreciated...fascinating last name, Sanskrit, looked it up
Date: 6/9/2022 4:41:00 PM
interesting but the depth seems to , elude , me
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/10/2022 3:05:00 PM
how about an allude....make the ordinary magical....
Date: 6/9/2022 5:57:00 AM
Beautiful poetry, Tim!
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/10/2022 2:57:00 PM
thank you Kim....
Date: 6/8/2022 5:20:00 PM
ooh la la la. A FAVE
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/10/2022 3:00:00 PM
pssst....the next one....she is cooking....you remind me of my daughters....so you are already a Fave
Date: 6/8/2022 1:06:00 PM
This is romanism at it's best and goes straight into my favs. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Cheers my friend :-)
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/10/2022 2:58:00 PM
thank you Anne......
Date: 6/8/2022 6:44:00 AM
An intoxicating sweetness that consumes all of the senses--so very exquisite, Timothy. Enchantment in every word--delightfully delivered.
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 11:19:00 AM
thank you Vijay
Date: 6/8/2022 3:04:00 AM
Ahh!! Romantically describing your date for dinner is very enchanting. It reminds me of The Book Of Song Of Solomon description of his/His bride. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 11:20:00 AM
thank you Sara
Date: 6/7/2022 8:59:00 PM
What a treat for the palate ! You have somebody in your mind who surpasses the taste and flavor of all delicious cuisines and you have paid a lovely tribute to her. Your descriptions are 'mouth drooling' Timothy! Enjoyed so much....
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/17/2022 11:21:00 AM
thank you Valsa...
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