She Has Great Legs

She smiled the smile of a bankrupt barrister
No one suspected her files were out of order
Walking across the floor on staccato heels
They stared as she strutted through the corridor 

They had fallen prey to her honeyed tones
Her breath had declared their innocence
They gladly paid her fee in advance
Deceived by confident indifference 

Unimpeded by the facts of the case
She only practiced the art of beauty
Her greatest successes gifted by men
Who were bewitched while on jury duty

Sometimes though, there would be a lady Judge
Demanding to hear the facts of the case 
The accused was no longer mesmerized
They had a look of concern on their face

The scales of justice weighted against them
Sad for them, no get out of jail free card
She's off to the next unsuspecting fool
They're unaware that she should be disbarred
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hicks Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 5:15 PM
What a cool story. It reminded me of those 90s dramas where the beautiful girl isn't what she seems and ensnares people in her lies. A cautionary tale where personal feelings affect the outcome of justice. Well told.
Dylan Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 7:53 PM
wow you had me there..lol .. great suspense and then the end awesome..writing... great poetry.I love free verse. . your my new favorite poet..
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 7:57 PM
Wow thanks I am honored.
Sirak Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 4:52 PM
A great tale full of caution. Love the line 'unimpeded by the facts' Those pesky facts do get in the way don't they?
Lamoureux Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 5:59 PM
I kinda like that line myself Monterey.
Austin Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 10:47 AM
Beauty is a dangerous thing, eh. Love this caution to the male. Love, daver
Lamoureux Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Thanks Daver.
Tacito Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 11:37 PM
Once again, your title & the poem's core message threw me for a loop. Beautiful twist towards the end.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 7:40 AM
Good morning Drake. Being you have turned me into a contortionist with your poems the least you can do is a little twisting with mine *lol*.
Macfarlane Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Excellent write Rick, sadly that is the way the cookie crumbles in society today. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Good morning and thanks Cecilia, hugs back to you.
Toil Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 8:44 AM
Hi Rick, If I were a woman, I think I would feel uncomfortable dressing in sexually provocative ways, such as your lawyer here. Knowing men's eyes were constantly looking me over. I would feel naked, I think. As men we can't help ourselves. Its like our eyes have a mind of their own. So -- they wander. Still, I think it is far better than forcing women to wear burkas:) BTW, I enjoyed our conversation this weekend. Peace...Sam
Lamoureux Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 9:17 AM
It was my pleasure Sam.
Manassian Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 8:08 AM
Reminds me of a song by Zizzy Top...She's got legs...She knows how to use them. Yes, some women do use beauty as a tool to get what they want when they and how they want it. Great write, Richard. I read this earlier, but am only now coming by to comment. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Thanks Eileen. Hugs back.
Hamilton Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 6:05 AM
very good Rick you caught her well a couple of spelling mistakes 2nd line use were not where. 2nd stanza last line deceived not deceaved that aside great pen ty for visiting my pages hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 7:23 AM
Good morning and tanks for pointing out the spelling, I have changed it.
Loving Iii Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 11:31 PM
I can tell this person is real. I sympathies for her never to become a partner only a tool to be used for a set limited time. Then to go the same way as all ladies of the evening. Disbarred is another issue she has time to recreate her self but will she before it's too late. Poems like this should open a few minds.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 7:24 AM
Thanks John.
Anglesey Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 11:16 PM
Very clever and there is probably much truth in this. Well crafted :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 7:26 AM
Thanks Karen, just having a bit of fun with this one.
Vaso Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 5:42 PM
You have me smiling, what a great write!!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 7:25 AM
Glad to make you smile.
Allison Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 4:48 PM
very clever write Richard - if i ever need a lawyer will find a handsome man and a lady judge lol hugs Jan x
Allison Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 7:31 AM
As you can see from my pic I'm a well behaved bird lol Happy Easter to you and your family Hugs Jan xxx
Lamoureux Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 7:26 AM
Ha, ha, good to plan ahead.
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 12:33 PM
hahahaa sounds like the shenigans on one of my favorite tv shows The Good wife. Have you seen it? Awesome show. Good poem, sir!!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 12:58 PM
One of my absolute favorite shows. Kalinda is my favorite character.
Dom Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 9:05 AM
Hmm, I'm familiar with this lawyer, or at least the practice. Nice write Richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 9:11 AM
Hi Michael, so nice to have your visit. Thanks for commenting.
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