She Had Appetites Too

Filmed by strangers,
a story doomed not to last.

Beauteous verse
wrapped in barbed wire—
each sonnet
a blade to the vein.

Eyes like jade—
not diamond,
but cut rock.
A granite heart.

Tar recedes
into stone.
Still, the boy covets
with hunger.
And the girl—
she has appetites too.

First love:
a pigtail yanked,
a giggle echoing through time.

Innocence dissolved
with each year gained.
But the eyes—
they never changed.

Breathe life and fire into love’s nest—
reignite the spark of youth,
peeking through years like iron curtains,
framing the fugitive selves
we left decimated.

I still see her—
not in dreams,
but in the hush between songs,
in the way a door closes softly
when no one is there.

She has appetites still.
And I—
I feed them
from a distance.
Let her starve for once.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/14/2025 7:59:00 PM
This really resonates with me, as I knew someone who fit this description at a very young age --- and she hasn't changed a bit. I finally learned to stay away in my late teens... Well- captured. A portrait so vividly drawn!
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