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She Dances

She dances she glances, Beyond her shoulder, She peers, Looking back, Her beautiful smile, She poses in the mirror. Looking for you, Looking for his love, No where in sight, The music plays, She dances, Dances through the night.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/15/2023 10:51:00 AM

Such a wonderful dance spun in your write Paula.Congratulations on your win! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 1:06:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my Dancing write. Have a fun/blessed day.............

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/15/2023 5:56:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 1:04:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. I enjoyed writing it. Have a fun/blessed day.............

Valsa George

Date: 7/14/2023 8:33:00 PM

Hearty Congratulations dear Paula on your first place meritorious win. Have a great weekend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 1:03:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my Dancing write. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a fun/blessed day.............

Eve Roper

Date: 7/14/2023 9:08:00 AM

Great write, congratulations on your 1st place win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 1:02:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my Dancing write. Have a fun/blessed day.............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/14/2023 8:26:00 AM

"1 Place" She Dances~Date Written: 6/15/2023

Valsa George

Date: 6/26/2023 8:18:00 PM

Quite complementary to the poem given. Good job. All the Best dear Paula !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2023 9:52:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best. Glad you found my Dancing write quite complementary. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a fun/blessed day.............

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/25/2023 12:56:00 PM

Reminds me of one of my cousins, she studied ballet and was always dancing around; very high energy. Enjoyed.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2023 1:01:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Dancing write. Dancing can be high energy. I did ballet as a kid. Now I would kill myself. Have a fun/blessed day.............

Sally Eslinger

Date: 6/25/2023 7:48:00 AM

Paula, hi! delightful yet sad (i know cause iShe was me & many others during our youth) and short but tells volumes, I thnk the spacing of the lines plus rythm of flow actually feels like a dance. I was touched a thank you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2023 11:51:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed and were touched by my Dancing write. Yes, many danced when we were young. Have a fun/blessed day.............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/21/2023 10:46:00 AM

She Dances Date Written: 6/15/2023

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/21/2023 7:08:00 AM

Very nice Paula. Well done :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2023 10:00:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Dancing write. Have a fun/blessed day.............

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/21/2023 6:17:00 AM

Lovely response to the prompt, Paula. Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2023 10:00:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you loved my response and my Dance write. Have a fun/blessed day..............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/20/2023 7:51:00 PM

Beautifully imagined poem, Paula. Bittersweet and stirring. Have a lovely evening. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2023 9:58:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my beautiful Dance write. Have a fun/blessed day..............

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/19/2023 7:07:00 PM

Love it Paula What I love most of all Is the line No where in sight Because you are speaking the truth Love and life Is this sometimes also Great poem sincere Cheers Chris

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2023 9:50:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love my Dance write. Have a fun/blessed day..............

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/19/2023 5:22:00 PM

Love this it…stirs the melody in my soul Sorry, my first comment had incorrect spelling. This is the updated version.6/21! Hugs..Pangie x Pangie..fellow Romaric,

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2023 9:48:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love my Dance write and it stirs your soul. Have a fun/blessed day..............

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 6/19/2023 12:13:00 PM

Hi Paula. Wonderful write.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2023 9:47:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun/cute Dance write. Have a fun/blessed day.............

Paul Callus

Date: 6/19/2023 4:48:00 AM

A most enjoyable poem, Paula. Once she finds the right man, they'll be able to dance through life together. Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2023 9:46:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Dancing write. Yes, she needs to find the right man to dance with her through life. Have a fun/blessed day.............

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/18/2023 8:33:00 PM

Wonderful imagery; powerful narrative, Paula! Much accomplished here with an economy of words. Bravo, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2023 9:44:00 AM

Thanks for your note and kind words. Glad you like my Dance write. Have a fun/blessed day.............

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/18/2023 7:54:00 PM

It means you and your dancing partner will come into face to face You are supposed to be the mirror image of the dance as you are facing the mirror-- look forward!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2023 9:43:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my cute Dance write. Have a fun/blessed day.............

Bill Baker

Date: 6/18/2023 2:12:00 PM

There's joy in movement, whether daning along are with a parner, Paula. Smiles ~ Blessings my friend. Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2023 9:41:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Dancing write. Have a fun/blessed day.............

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/18/2023 11:42:00 AM

She is one happy dancer...how can she sleep with all of that energy? Cute pen.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/21/2023 9:40:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my happy Dancer write. It is hard to sleep when you want to dance all night. Have a fun/blessed day dancing away..............

Jack Horne

Date: 6/18/2023 3:58:00 AM

very descriptive - loved picturing this

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2023 9:22:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you loved picturing my cute Dance write. Have a fun/blessed ~~ day/week..............

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/16/2023 11:55:00 AM

Dance on my friend. A cute poem. Alas I have lost the ability to dance this day, I always loved dance, the slow waltz being my favorite, Thanks for your visit.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/18/2023 9:19:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my cute Dance write. We can dance in our mind. Have a fun/blessed ~~ day/week..............

Michael Tor

Date: 6/16/2023 2:32:00 AM

Love your Poem Paula wishing her a future partner... Hope you are doing well Dear lady...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/16/2023 11:10:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love my Dance write. I enjoyed writing this one. One day she may find that dance partner. I am feeling much better. It is good to be back to writing. Have a fun/blessed ~~ day/weekend..............

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/15/2023 5:08:00 PM

Oh Paula, how delightful your poem is. It exudes cleverness and warmth, leaving me with the hope that one day she will find her perfect dance partner.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/16/2023 11:09:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this Dance write. Some dancers want a perfect dance partner. Have a fun/blessed ~~ day/weekend..............

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/15/2023 3:56:00 PM

I pray she finds her dance partner soon one day :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/16/2023 11:08:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my Dance write. Some dance alone and some want a partner. Have a fun/blessed ~~ day/weekend..............