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She Danced

The flowers danced within the breeze
The music box dancer danced with ease
She danced and danced within his heart
For he loved her from the very start

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Lea O'Brien

February 15, 2010 at 6:35 PM

What a romantic poem! Perfect for Valentines day

Mac Mcgovern

February 3, 2010 at 12:20 PM

Reminds of the first time I met my wife. I know it reminds, because it feels the same way 32 years later. Thank you for the memories and your wonderfully written poem. Much apppreciated. Mac

Rhia Madison Thomer

February 1, 2010 at 9:57 PM

Hmm beautifully written in such a few lines, I think I am foinf to fav this. Thanks for the comments <3 Madison

Margaret Foster

January 31, 2010 at 5:36 PM

A sweet and gentle Quatrain that brings a smile...thank you...Margaret

James Fraser

January 31, 2010 at 7:36 AM

Delightful Quatrain Sara >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 30, 2010 at 5:09 AM

Romantic perfection through you words... Absolutely great, Sara !!! Love, Dane

Charmaine Chircop

January 29, 2010 at 12:09 PM

Very sweet indeed.. Charma:)

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

January 29, 2010 at 9:04 AM

How very sweet. Thanks for visiting me and your kind comments. Have a great day! Scarlett

Bojosi Ditshwele

January 29, 2010 at 6:45 AM

Love this one Sara keep writing these sweet poems of yours. thanx for your comments

Virginia Mitchell

January 29, 2010 at 3:32 AM

This brings to mind my childhood days, when I mused at the "music box dancer" : )

Mohammad Yamin

January 28, 2010 at 4:11 PM

An awesome write, Sara - perfect in rhyme -pleasing to read. A tribute to your talent. Thanks for your educated comments on my poem The Call of Death. You have captured the spirit of the poem in your comments. -Mohammad

John Freeman

January 28, 2010 at 9:25 AM

A top notch rhyme Sara, Beautiful thought in your Quatrain. Sincerely, love, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 28, 2010 at 9:19 AM

awwwwww Sara this is so beautiful. Bring us more please. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

January 28, 2010 at 12:43 AM

Sounds like my wife and my story Sara.Nice one for the favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today. Ginger beer is a refreshing non-achol soft drink in England

William Kershaw

January 27, 2010 at 10:49 PM

Sara, Brief and sweet. well done dear lady. Thanks for your kind words. They mean more than you know. Love, Will

Colleen Bono

January 27, 2010 at 6:18 PM

short and sweet.I hope you had a great day.I posted a new poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 27, 2010 at 4:03 PM

Such beauty from u today... dancing is such a lovely expressive form ... as poetry ... u have captured its magic ... thankxxx for sharing ... luv.. Linda-Marie..