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She Danced

The flowers danced within the breeze
The music box dancer danced with ease
She danced and danced within his heart
For he loved her from the very start

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/15/2010 6:35:00 PM
What a romantic poem! Perfect for Valentines day
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Date: 2/3/2010 12:20:00 PM
Reminds of the first time I met my wife. I know it reminds, because it feels the same way 32 years later. Thank you for the memories and your wonderfully written poem. Much apppreciated. Mac
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Date: 2/1/2010 9:57:00 PM
Hmm beautifully written in such a few lines, I think I am foinf to fav this. Thanks for the comments <3 Madison
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Date: 1/31/2010 5:36:00 PM
A sweet and gentle Quatrain that brings a smile...thank you...Margaret
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Date: 1/31/2010 7:36:00 AM
Delightful Quatrain Sara >> James
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Date: 1/30/2010 5:09:00 AM
Romantic perfection through you words... Absolutely great, Sara !!! Love, Dane
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Date: 1/29/2010 12:09:00 PM
Very sweet indeed.. Charma:)
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Date: 1/29/2010 9:04:00 AM
How very sweet. Thanks for visiting me and your kind comments. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 1/29/2010 6:45:00 AM
Love this one Sara keep writing these sweet poems of yours. thanx for your comments
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Date: 1/29/2010 3:32:00 AM
This brings to mind my childhood days, when I mused at the "music box dancer" : )
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Date: 1/28/2010 4:11:00 PM
An awesome write, Sara - perfect in rhyme -pleasing to read. A tribute to your talent. Thanks for your educated comments on my poem The Call of Death. You have captured the spirit of the poem in your comments. -Mohammad
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Date: 1/28/2010 9:25:00 AM
A top notch rhyme Sara, Beautiful thought in your Quatrain. Sincerely, love, Moses
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Date: 1/28/2010 9:19:00 AM
awwwwww Sara this is so beautiful. Bring us more please. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/28/2010 12:43:00 AM
Sounds like my wife and my story Sara.Nice one for the favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today. Ginger beer is a refreshing non-achol soft drink in England
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Date: 1/27/2010 10:49:00 PM
Sara, Brief and sweet. well done dear lady. Thanks for your kind words. They mean more than you know. Love, Will
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Date: 1/27/2010 6:18:00 PM
short and sweet.I hope you had a great day.I posted a new poem.
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Date: 1/27/2010 4:03:00 PM
Such beauty from u today... dancing is such a lovely expressive form ... as poetry ... u have captured its magic ... thankxxx for sharing ... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/27/2010 2:44:00 PM
It makes a very cute image in my mind, Sara! thanks for sharing. LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/27/2010 1:51:00 PM
Beautiful words love is grand.Thanks Sara for your kind and thoughtful comment.Teresa
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Date: 1/27/2010 12:17:00 PM
lovely poem mom, reminds me of the buck dancer
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Date: 1/27/2010 12:11:00 PM
An enchanting write that warms the soul; magical and romantic. Beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 1/27/2010 11:54:00 AM
Excellent because it is short and sweet to the point.... keep on writing... Ann
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